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  Posted on December 8, 2012 16:12
Rasengan_89
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Credits for the original picture I used for the banner go to Ricardonamikaze
Credits for the final banner I used go to me :oh

Hello there.
Comments like "Bad skills" "6.1/10" "wtf lol" will be ignored.
RATE AND COMMENT PLEASE, EXPLAIN RATE UNDER 8.5

I am pretty sure he is OP, lol, but idc

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Mission (Mission goals = in-game ones. No fantasy, at all.)
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Here you are some notes before you comment:
- About the facepic
I can't improve it more than this. If anyone can do it better, please send me the face pic and I will change it immediately
- About the pics
I did my best, I am a newbie in making very small pictures, esp in HQ
- About the skills
Just define OP and UP and how should I change it.
- About the grammar
If you find any mistake, report it so I can fix that.
- About the CnC
I want to read them. Without them I cant improve the character and myself

Credits go to:
- Rasengan_89 (me) for editing the pictures and making the characters.

Average rate: x/10 Based upon the x rates
Thanks to everyone who comments :)

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  Posted on December 8, 2012 16:16
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10/10 I love this, man. :D
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  Posted on December 8, 2012 16:18
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Well, the pictures are really good and the grammar/explanation is fine aswell.

When you make a character you have to keep it in real. I understood what you did with the Rasenshuriken part but he never actually transformed into a Rasenshuriken. You just zoomed the picture you posted some hours ago today and made this one. However, the character is quite OP due to so many alternative skills but still kept in real.
1st skill shouldn't have CD in my opinion.

However , unique and you quite worked on it so all i can say is 9/10
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  Posted on December 8, 2012 16:18
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  Posted on December 8, 2012 16:19
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Great Character, 9/10 :smile
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  Posted on December 8, 2012 16:20
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Not all of the skills are unique (like the Rasengan Barrage)
FP is weird, I don't like it.
Frog Kick is UP.
Rasenshuriken is UP.
Could be improved more balance-wise.
7.7/10
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  Posted on December 8, 2012 16:20
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9/10
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  Posted on December 8, 2012 16:23
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Bluedragon97 wrote:
Great Character, 9/10 :smile
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  Posted on December 8, 2012 16:24
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FKP is UP for me (For the cost)

SM is OP D:

gain 1 nin and random and heals for 2 turns? D:

is much!

And well, The rest is okay o:

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  Posted on December 8, 2012 16:24
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godbot wrote:
Not all of the skills are unique (like the Rasengan Barrage)
FP is weird, I don't like it.
Frog Kick is UP.
Rasenshuriken is UP.
Could be improved more balance-wise.
7.7/10

Frog Kick.. what if i increase damage to 25 and remove the CD?
Rasenshuriken UP? How?!
It deals 35 piercing dmg + 10 affliction dmg to the others and cannot be countered nor reflected :oh
Would you explain me why is UP in ur opinion?

Thanks.
orochismaru wrote:
Well, the pictures are really good and the grammar/explanation is fine aswell.

When you make a character you have to keep it in real. I understood what you did with the Rasenshuriken part but he never actually transformed into a Rasenshuriken. You just zoomed the picture you posted some hours ago today and made this one. However, the character is quite OP due to so many alternative skills but still kept in real.
1st skill shouldn't have CD in my opinion.

However , unique and you quite worked on it so all i can say is 9/10

Same here, Frog Kick.. what if i increase damage to 25 and remove the CD?


Thanks to all.
Narutorazengan25 wrote:
FKP is UP for me (For the cost)

SM is OP D:

gain 1 nin and random and heals for 2 turns? D:

is much!

And well, The rest is okay o:

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No, SM heals 15 points when you active it, then nomore :oh
He cannot become invulnerable for 2 turns, then.
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  Posted on December 8, 2012 16:27
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but says "gains 1 ninjutsu and 1 random chakra" .___.

Edit:

The best idea is gain only 1 random chakra during 2 turns, not ninjutsu

and action classes e.e

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  Posted on December 8, 2012 16:29
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Uhm... ya :oh
But it happens only once, that is once you active that skill :oh
And I was jsut pointing out he heals just once and gains chakra only once :oh
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  Posted on December 8, 2012 16:30
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Rasengan_89 wrote:
godbot wrote:
Not all of the skills are unique (like the Rasengan Barrage)
FP is weird, I don't like it.
Frog Kick is UP.
Rasenshuriken is UP.
Could be improved more balance-wise.
7.7/10

Frog Kick.. what if i increase damage to 25 and remove the CD?
Rasenshuriken UP? How?!
It deals 35 piercing dmg + 10 affliction dmg to the others and cannot be countered nor reflected :oh
Would you explain me why is UP in ur opinion?

Thanks.
orochismaru wrote:
Well, the pictures are really good and the grammar/explanation is fine aswell.

When you make a character you have to keep it in real. I understood what you did with the Rasenshuriken part but he never actually transformed into a Rasenshuriken. You just zoomed the picture you posted some hours ago today and made this one. However, the character is quite OP due to so many alternative skills but still kept in real.
1st skill shouldn't have CD in my opinion.

However , unique and you quite worked on it so all i can say is 9/10

Same here, Frog Kick.. what if i increase damage to 25 and remove the CD?


Thanks to all.
Narutorazengan25 wrote:
FKP is UP for me (For the cost)

SM is OP D:

gain 1 nin and random and heals for 2 turns? D:

is much!

And well, The rest is okay o:

9

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No, SM heals 15 points when you active it, then nomore :oh
He cannot become invulnerable for 2 turns, then.

It's UP because .... make the piercing damage 40. Then it'd be better.
And the Frog Kick - remove the random.
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  Posted on December 8, 2012 16:31
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Nice! 10/10 very good :amused
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  Posted on December 8, 2012 16:34
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10/10 no more words :rolleyes
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