Sasuke Rehabilitated (S)


 Topic: Sasuke Rehabilitated (S)
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  Posted on November 21, 2012 23:24
perez95
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Grammar:
I know that there are mistakes because the language is foreign to me. Please correct me
Skill Class:
I know the classes can be bad because this procedure is not for me a little unclear.

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  Posted on November 21, 2012 23:30
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7 Interesting.
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  Posted on November 21, 2012 23:33
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8. :amused
  Posted on November 21, 2012 23:41
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genjutsu attacks?
So.. mental skills?
Simple, and looks little OP

8

not bad, just need more work

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  Posted on November 21, 2012 23:44
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6 simple and not original
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  Posted on November 22, 2012 00:03
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#6
Kirin is not afflication, change it to chakra.
Find a better name for 2nd skill then Sharingan because it's already used by the 12 year old sasuke in-game.
Change Genjustu attacks to mental(ignores mental attacks) it would make more senses but not many characters uses mental attacks so its practically useless.
3rd skill 15 damage for 1 random and 2 CD?? not so usefull.. Make it no Cooldown
Not original.
I think you should change the 3rd skill classe (action) to Instant because the skill looks like Iruka's Shuriken Throw and probably need the same classes.
I like the face pic.
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  Posted on November 22, 2012 00:04
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VanillaGFX wrote:
7 Interesting.
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  Posted on November 22, 2012 00:25
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7 Looks okay to me.
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