Mizukage


 Topic: Mizukage
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  Posted on November 19, 2012 18:23
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#1
rate and comment
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  Posted on November 19, 2012 18:28
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This is fabulous becky. 9/10


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  Posted on November 19, 2012 18:28
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#3
The "X will be considered dead" has nothing to do with the skill and... I don't like the idea.
Bad grammar.
No originality.
Could use improvements.
8/10
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  Posted on November 19, 2012 18:32
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That's trollkage man, 10/10.
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  Posted on November 19, 2012 18:32
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#5
he is not bad coz he is from showcase
just wanted to make sure :P
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  Posted on November 19, 2012 18:36
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(turkey) its a bit....black n white :rolleyes


jk a good 7/10
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  Posted on November 19, 2012 18:38
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Not in desert? o.O
  Posted on November 19, 2012 18:39
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Destiny0ne wrote:
Not in desert? o.O
location was desert ya trollface XD
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  Posted on November 19, 2012 20:10
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good job i like....
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9.6/10 :oh
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  Posted on November 19, 2012 20:13
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godbot wrote:
The "X will be considered dead" has nothing to do with the skill and... I don't like the idea.
Bad grammar.
No originality.
Could use improvements.
8/10
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  Posted on November 19, 2012 20:33
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#11
Well, first of all, he doesn't summon "oil" his actual summon is a Giant Clam.

- I Liked the 3rd skill, has some originality.

- The effect in the second skill is dump. I suggest make it deal 30 affliction damage and change the effect to something like, " After 2 turns that this skill has been used, Mizukage will deal 10 less damage for 2 turn and gain 50 % of damage reduction for 1 turn.

- The rest is Ok

Rating : 8/10
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