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Posted on November 19, 2012 18:23

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rate and comment

Challenge meh D:<
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Posted on November 19, 2012 18:28

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This is fabulous becky. 9/10

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Posted on November 19, 2012 18:28

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The "X will be considered dead" has nothing to do with the skill and... I don't like the idea.
Bad grammar.
No originality.
Could use improvements.
8/10

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Posted on November 19, 2012 18:32

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That's trollkage man, 10/10.

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Posted on November 19, 2012 18:32

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he is not bad coz he is from showcase
just wanted to make sure :P

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Posted on November 19, 2012 18:36

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(turkey) its a bit....black n white :rolleyes

jk a good 7/10

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Posted on November 19, 2012 18:38

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Not in desert? o.O

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Posted on November 19, 2012 18:39

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Destiny0ne wrote:

Not in desert? o.O

location was desert ya trollface XD

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Posted on November 19, 2012 20:10

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good job i like....
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9.6/10 :oh

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Posted on November 19, 2012 20:13

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#10

godbot wrote:

The "X will be considered dead" has nothing to do with the skill and... I don't like the idea.
Bad grammar.
No originality.
Could use improvements.
8/10

Posted on November 19, 2012 20:33

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#11

Well, first of all, he doesn't summon "oil" his actual summon is a Giant Clam.

- I Liked the 3rd skill, has some originality.

- The effect in the second skill is dump. I suggest make it deal 30 affliction damage and change the effect to something like, " After 2 turns that this skill has been used, Mizukage will deal 10 less damage for 2 turn and gain 50 % of damage reduction for 1 turn.

- The rest is Ok

Rating : 8/10

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