Yondaime Hokage || By Rasengan_89

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Posted on November 19, 2012 09:38

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Credits for the original picture I used for the banner go to Ricardonamikaze
Credits for the final banner I used go to me

Hello there.
Comments like "Bad skills" "6.1/10" "wtf lol" will be ignored.
RATE AND COMMENT PLEASE, EXPLAIN RATE UNDER 8.5

Description is kinda (a lot? xD) similar to the in-game one, since I had no fantasy for it.

Chakra Usage: 1

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Mission

Here you are some notes before you comment:
- About the facepic
I can't improve it more than this. If anyone can do it better, please send me the face pic and I will change it immediately
- About the pics
I did my best, I am a newbie in making very small pictures, esp in HQ
- About the skills
Just define OP and UP and how should I change it.
- About the grammar
If you find any mistake, report it so I can fix that.
- About the CnC
I want to read them. Without them I cant improve the character and myself

Credits go to:
- Rasengan_89 (me) for editing the pictures and making the characters.

Average rate: x/10 Based upon the x rates
Thanks to everyone who comments :)

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Posted on November 19, 2012 09:43

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nice 8/10

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Posted on November 19, 2012 09:50

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8/10 bravo:amused

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Posted on November 19, 2012 10:12

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Good one.10/10

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Posted on November 19, 2012 10:17

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Do the alternate skills only last for one round?
He seems good.

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Posted on November 19, 2012 10:21

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I like it. 9/10. Also, first spelling error I noticed was in his description. It reads "The yellow Flask

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Posted on November 19, 2012 10:23

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joshuahyuuga wrote:

Do the alternate skills only last for one round?
He seems good.

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Yes, for 1 turn.

Conker wrote:

I like it. 9/10. Also, first spelling error I noticed was in his description. It reads "The yellow Flask

Will be fixed with the new template once I fixed the balance, thanks a lot.

Posted on November 19, 2012 10:30

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9

perfect

Posted on November 19, 2012 10:32

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9/10 actually dope assssss!! Nicely balanced i like it

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Posted on November 19, 2012 10:35

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#10

Very nice 9/10 :amused

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Posted on November 19, 2012 11:29

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#11

i like your character, it's really good, but i think that doing a yondaime hokage without his main move, which is the dead demon soul technique is wrong on his character, so 8/10
but i have no doubts that if you had that skill on his skillset i would give you a 10 rating :tounge

Posted on November 19, 2012 11:35

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#12

Looks so sexy <3

but, the last skill is instant .-.
and the rest is fucking great <3

10

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Posted on November 19, 2012 11:51

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#13

10/10

Posted on November 19, 2012 11:56

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#14

Woah thanks a lot :D

I made it Action because it's not instant.
Example:
Yondaime uses that skill on himself.
Naruto (S) uses oodama Rasengan on him. The skill absorbs the damage.
The later turn the opponent behaves like nothing happened.
When it's my turn again, naruto (S) gets 40 piercing damage.

This was my idea :oh

kunhadavid wrote:

I know, my friend.
But I felt like he must use THESE skills,
His signature move is the Flying God Technique.
The seal one... who knows... I just didnt have any good idea to apply it :)

Posted on November 19, 2012 12:06

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#15

maybe something comes up and you make a change on it :tounge

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