Naruto Chakra Mode || By Rasengan_89

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Posted on October 19, 2012 13:35

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Hello there.
Comments like "Bad skills" "6.1/10" "wtf lol" will be ignored.
RATE AND COMMENT PLEASE, EXPLAIN RATE UNDER 8.5
THIS NARUTO IS THE VERSION PRE-WAR, WHILE HE JUST GOT THIS NEW POWER. DO NOT COMPARE HIM TO THE ONE OF THE MANGA PLEASE.

DO NOT JUST VOTE, RATE AND COMMENT PLEASE

Chakra Usage: 1

- 2

- 1

- 2

Mission:

Here you are some notes before you comment:
- About the facepic
I can't improve it more than this. If anyone can do it better, please send me the face pic and I will change it immediately
- About the pics
I did my best, I am a newbie in making very small pictures, esp in HQ
- About the skills
Just define OP and UP and how should I change it.
- About the grammar
If you find any mistake, report it so I can fix that.
- About the CnC
I want to read them. Without them I cant improve the character and myself

Credits go to:
- niksancheto for the amazing HQ pictures, thanks a lot for the trust.
- stefy96 for the software I used ot make this character
- Rasengan_89 (me) for editing the pictures and making the characters.

Average rate: 8.2/10 Based upon the 18 rates
Thanks to everyone who comments :)

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Posted on October 19, 2012 13:41

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5/10..................

“He who moves first always wins.”

Posted on October 19, 2012 13:44

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mihaitzanaruto wrote:

5/10..................

Gonna ignore it.

Posted on October 19, 2012 13:53

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Pretty nice damage output tbh. I didn't neccesarily like the idea that he has a 35 piercing skill for a spec + random with no cooldown, but I guess it could be seen as fine since it's his only attacking move before his prep. Maybe you can divide it's damage into two categories, kind of like Sennin Jiraiya's Bath of Burning Oil. I like the idea of Kushina's Encouragement, regardless of it being original or not, I've always liked skills that activate other skills + a nice effect. I think Chakra Mode needs to be bumped up to three turns, and Amateur Bijudama needs to be given a 1 turn cooldown. Pics are also beautiful, but I do like the new style of making the facepic a lot closer to their, you know, face.

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Posted on October 19, 2012 13:54

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Rasengan_89 wrote:

mihaitzanaruto wrote:

5/10..................

Gonna ignore it.

Gonna explain
Some pics are bad
It's ''instant'' not ''istant''
No mission ? WTF ?
2nd and 3rd skill are Naruto Sennin's skills. This char should have only Kurama Mode Naruto's pics
Too simple
Too OP
You know my rate
Just take criticism !

“He who moves first always wins.”

Posted on October 19, 2012 13:54

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Sasukes-The-Best wrote:

Thanks a lot, gonna try with a closer face pic, plus I think I will apply your edits, thanks a lot for the words, I appreciated them. :amused

mihaitzanaruto wrote:

Gonna fix the grammar mistake :embarressed

Read my notes at the end of my post about pics :D
No mission because I thought I had to add the complete mission, but I will add the name now :D
I want to underline his name: Naruto Nine-Tails Chakra Mode (training session). He is not complete, ofc.
And he didnt show MUCH yet. I wanted to create a char with the inner-self conflict with the Bijuu, making him more versatile and less boring.
I ignroed your comment before because I wrote in my first post that I wont accept such comments.
Thanks a lot for your words I appreciate them.

Posted on October 19, 2012 14:28

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good char and good quality pictures
Overall 9/10
GOOD WORK!

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Posted on October 19, 2012 14:30

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hunin wrote:

good char and good quality pictures
Overall 9/10
GOOD WORK!

Thanks a lot :laugh

Posted on October 19, 2012 18:28

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very original 8/10

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Posted on October 19, 2012 18:44

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#10

Amegakure-Pain wrote:

very original 8/10

Thanks a lot :)

Posted on October 19, 2012 19:47

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Amegakure-Pain wrote:

very original 8/10

I agree with him, but as it was said earlier MRB doesn't feat here as it is Kyuubi Chakra Mode Naruto, not Naruto Sennin.
--As to KE, I can say that on the whole the skill is great but need to be corrected.
--So my rate is 7,5/10
--Try to make other possible skills of him in chakra mode and it will be great) And as you've said to my char, FP plays no role for me so it doesn't effect my rate :amused

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Posted on October 19, 2012 20:20

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#12

stalkersom wrote:

Amegakure-Pain wrote:

very original 8/10

Thanks a lot, I appreciate your words :amused

About MRB, I perfectly know it's not a "Chakra Mode skill", but as I said before, I wanted to take it from the inner struggle he had with Kurama.
And, as I previously said, I will be making a new naruto Chakra mode in few weeks, once he showed all his potential ;)

Posted on October 19, 2012 20:31

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#13

Great character. I a lot of critiques have already been given on what I would have changed or wanted to be changed with this character,but nothing left for me to,only! Good job! Original character,great HQ pics (imo). Since I'm a big fan of Naruto i this mode,you get a Plus + from me. 9/10. The idea for this is perfect.

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Posted on October 19, 2012 20:51

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chaos- wrote:

got a 9/10 by a moderator, thanks a lot!
I prefer the latest Naruto version, the one who got friendly with Kurama, but I wanted to make one with Anime screenshots :D
Thanks a lot for the comment, I appreciate it :cool

Posted on October 19, 2012 22:21

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Come on, don't be shy, rate and CnC!

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