Mei Terumi by me


 Topic: Mei Terumi by me
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53 vote(s) since June 2, 2012 14:46
yes (26) (49%)
no (21) (40%)
its +/- (6) (11%)
  Posted on June 2, 2012 14:46
tomasakatsuki
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#1
mei terumi thanks to miTKY for the pics arigatou xD sorry for gramr errors im pt





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  Posted on June 2, 2012 14:48
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#2
nice one make more
  Posted on June 2, 2012 14:50
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#3
4/10

too short char description
1st skill is not understandable
bad classes
grammar mistakes
UP
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  Posted on June 2, 2012 14:50
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#4
Lava Cannon Great Cost!

9.0
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  Posted on June 2, 2012 14:51
Narutorazengan25
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#5
3/10

Classes very bad! è.e

bad chakra
bad balance
bad grammar


sorry :l

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  Posted on June 2, 2012 14:52
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#6
2
Simple. Skills aren't nice and original
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  Posted on June 2, 2012 14:52
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#7
balena wrote:
4/10

too short char description
1st skill is not understandable
grammar mistakes
UP

Agree.

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  Posted on June 2, 2012 14:53
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#8
8/10 :) a little gramar mistake on first skill
wanted so see more jutsus
little char discription

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  Posted on June 2, 2012 14:53
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#9
i donțt understand why "lava cannon" costs 1 taijutsu and 1 ninjutsu.Because it is a kekkei genkai skill it should costs for example 1 ninjutsu and 1 bloodline

sorry for grammar mistakes:teeth
  Posted on June 2, 2012 14:53
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#10
#1 Many grammar mistakes.
#2 That can't even be called a description;needs a lot of improvement.
#3 Bad misson name.
#4 Lava Cannon being a chakra removing skill makes no sense...but anyways it is underpowered;make it deal 30 damage or change it to 25 piercing damage.
#5 Mist Cannon is underpowered too;make it deal 20 piercing damage;or keep the 20 normal damage;but change it to make the targeted opponent deal 50% less damage for 1 turn.
#6 Need to better classify the skills.
#7 Good pics.
3.5/10
  Posted on June 2, 2012 15:05
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#11
5/10
Grammar mistakes
Unerpowered for the chakra costs
Not Original
  Posted on June 2, 2012 15:05
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#12
I like this.. its balanced.. 8/10
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  Posted on June 2, 2012 15:07
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#13
3/10
  Posted on June 2, 2012 15:22
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#14
8
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  Posted on June 2, 2012 15:23
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#15
i dunno like the grammar mistakes but
10/10
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