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  Posted on November 5, 2007 14:39
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now ok
  Posted on November 8, 2007 03:06
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Another kickass fan-fic by XSan, great job, cant wait for more!
No lie, i cant wait.
  Posted on November 9, 2007 20:55
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Alright, I'm back, which means another chapter or so will be comin' today.

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  Posted on November 10, 2007 05:12
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Ok, before we start, I've switched Hirozumi and Maya's ages, making Maya 16 and Hirozumi 17.

Alright.......

Trick 4-Team Territory

Later that night, Kara had dinner ready and set on the hot stone. Maya and Kai both came downstairs for dinner. During it...........

Kai: *uses his chopsticks to reach for a piece of steak* Maya......ya mind if I ask you somethin'?

Maya: Depends. What is it?

Kai: You said your a storm rider, right? *puts the steak on his plate*

Maya: Did I studder?

Kai: You got a team?

Maya: I'm not the leader of team, if that's what you mean. Although, I am on a team.

Kai: Must be pretty low-rate, seeing that they let you in, huh? *reaches for another steak*

Maya: *puts her chopsticks on the same steak*

Kai: *small gasp* Urgh......

Maya: Alright, Kai. Just move the sticks, and I wont pound your face in, alright?!

Kai: Hell no! This is the best piece on the entire entray, I'm not letting this thing go for NOTHIN'!

Maya: *sighs* I guess I've been pretty mean to you lately, havent I? Alright, you can have it!

Kai: Really?

Maya: No lie!

Kai: Hell yeah! I've finally won against you......now gimme my meat, woman!

Maya: *snatches the meat up and throws it in Kai's face, burning him*

Kai: *yells in pain* ARGH!!!!! *falls back*

Kara: *sighs* The two of you, its just a nonstop party!

Maya: Now, if you really want to know, the Storm Rider team I'm on just happens to be C class! We're really getting up there in the ranks, higher than your sorry ass would ever be able to!

Kai: *anime tears pouring from his eyes* You bitch.....I should kick your ass for that!

Maya: Please, I really dont think you should waste any of your energy tonight, your gonna need all of it for tomorrow.

Kai: What?

Maya: *giggles* Nothing! Just wait 'till tomorrow, 'kay?! *winks*

Kai: Yeah, whatever, as long as I get my AT's.

Maya: I still dont know how your gonna get the money.

Kai: I've got a couple of plans. *devilish smile*

The next day, school was out for the weekend. Kai woke up early and walked down the streets of the city to meet up with his best friend, Toriko Haminara, to tell him about the Air Trek business. The two of them met around noon, at the fountain from before.

Kai: *waving* Yo! Toriko!

Toriko: *listening to an MP3, he removes his earphones* Yo, Kai! What the hell took you so long?! 'Been waitin' here for half an hour!

Kai: Long story short, I had to raise some cash.

Toriko: Hmm........you sure about this entire Air Trek deal? I've heard that the lives of Storm Riders are pretty damn tough, according to a couple of friends of mine.

Kai: No doubt, it'd be pretty damn stupid to back down after I worked all morning for the cash. *pulls out a wad of money from his pocket*

Toriko: Woah........where the hell'd you get that?!

Kai: Ya know, you'd be suprised at how much women at a hair salon downtown pay to see me dance with my shirt off. *rolls eyes*

Toriko: No joke? Maybe I should give that a try?

Kai: *walks by Toriko* Like hell, you'll never have abs like these.

Toriko: Shut up! *follows behind Kai*

They walk down the streets, seeing Storm Riders skating down the streets. Thoughts rushed through Kai's head, knowing that he would soon be one of them. He looked at the address on the piece of paper Maya gave him the night before.

Toriko: Dude, ya know what your doing?

Kai: Yeah, I'm pretty sure. Maya and I may not get along all that well, but she doesnt hate me enough to trick me like this......although, she did say somethin' about "coming back alive" and all that.

Toriko: Maya? Dude, the purple-haired one?

Kai: Yeah, that's the one.

Toriko: Good lord, we both know how sexy she is! You gotta get that, man! No joke!

Kai: Maya?

Toriko: And if that doesnt work, then there's always Kara, she's pretty cute too. Let's face it, you live with two hot girls, you've gotta get one of them sooner or later!

Kai: Dude, you dont even know them! If you see the way that Maya treats me at home, its as if SHE runs the house, when we both know I'M THE MAN!

Toriko: We do? You sure?

Kai: And Kara, well.....she may not act this way in public, but whenever Maya and I get to arguin', which happens just about every time we see each other, she always acts like the most mature one of us, even though Maya and I are both a year older than her.

Toriko: Who cares? There cute, their yours, I'M JEALOUS.

Kai: Let's see you live with them for a week, see how you feel!

Toriko: I would gladly take your spot in life, ANY DAY!

Kai: Shut it, alright? Here's the shop......*looks up at the sign* Kimoto Storm Rider Shop.........

Toriko: Hmm, its like this thing has been here all along, but we've never noticed it.......

Kai: Yeah.......anyway, looks like there open. Let's hurry, get in, get out, and start tearin' up the streets. *walks into the shop, followed by Toriko*

The entire shop was filled with racks upon racks of AT's and safety gear for Storm Riders. From helmets, to pads, body weights, and a dozens of different AT types. Kai and Toriko stared in awe.

Shop Owner: So, you gonna buy somethin'? Or are you just spectators?

Kai: Huh?

Shop Owner: Buying?

Kai: Oh yeah! I got the cash, no worries. I'm just.....searching for that special pair, ya know? *checks out a pair* Toriko, you've got your cash, dont ya?

Toriko: Hell no.

Kai: Figured, that's why I gave a lap dance at the salon. *passes cash to Toriko* Buy cheap, though.

Toriko: Nice! I'll start searching around.

Shop Owner: *chuckles* Yall dont look too bright, buy you must be pretty damn brave to come around this shop.

Kai: Well, why's that?

Shop Owner: Your tellin' me you dont know? This is Shadowlurk territory.

Kai: Shadowlurk?

Shop Owner: An F class Storm Rider team, they've completely taken this territory over by force. Do you see how amazing this shop is? Dont you think that I'd be sold out by now if it was open completely to the public?

Kai: True.....but, why dont higher ranked Storm Riders just take the territory back?

Shop Owner: Their all "sponsored" and such, so they dont really need a place like this.

Toriko: So, your saying we should probably high-tail it outta here?

Shop Owner: That'd be what any smart person would do.

Toriko: In that case, Kai, I go, you stay. *begins to walk out*

Kai: *grabs Toriko by the collar* Pussy. *sighs* We'll be fine, dont worry.

Shop Owner: I cant help but worry, counting on the fact that here they come. *points out of the shop, a large shadow begins to creep toward it*

Out of it, a group of 4 people, all wearing black cloaks and lead by a large figure hiding in the shadows, enters the shop.

Man: Takamaru, you adjusted my new Treks, right?

Takamaru: No worries, Kraven, their all ready. *hands a pair of AT's from the bottom of the shelf to the man*

Kai: *turns to the Shop Owner* So, your name's Takamaru?

Kraven: What the hell? There's somebody else in my territory?

Takamaru: Please, just leave these two alone. Their noobs in the world of AT, the had no idea until I told them about it a few minutes ago.

Kraven: Well, if they had half the brain, they'd get the hell out of my territory!

Kai: Back of, bitch! I aint goin' nowhere....not until I've picked up myself a pair of AT's!

Toriko: Oh, yeah, we're dead now.

Kraven: *looks at Kai, top-down* You act like you've got the skills to back up those words, kid.

Kai: Huh?

Kraven: Ya know what, I'll let you get your AT's.........and we're gonna have a little race. This is how I tend to figure out my disagreements. You up for it?

Toriko: That's bullshit! Kai's never even touched AT's before, now your challenging him to a r.....

Kai: I accept.

Kraven: Oooo, so we've got a brave guy on our hands?

Kai: I'm not backin' down from yo' ugly ass, if that's what you mean. *devilish smile*

Kraven: Alright then! It's gonna be a 2 on 1 race to the Local Mall! Let's see if you can back up your potty mouth! And here's a deal....*turns to Takamaru* Taka, mind if we borrow a pair?

Takamaru: Hey, this is your territory.

Kraven: Alright then, you can use a pair of AT's in this shop. If you can win against me and one of my members, we'll let you take the AT's AND the territory!

Kai: Hello? No team here.

Kraven: Oh, yeah....well, we'll let you take as many AT's from the shop as you like, and the territory goes free!

Kai: *puts his hand forward* Alright then, I accept.

Kraven: *pounds fists* Alright, meet you outside. *walks away*

Takamaru: Stick it to'em, kid. I'm ready to get my shop back in business!

Kai: No worries. *grabs a pair of AT's and inspects them* Yes.......these ones, they look perfect. *devilish smile*

*End of Trick 4*

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Nothin' to say.lol

Hope you enjoyed the Trick.

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  Posted on November 10, 2007 08:45
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Kai: Ya know, you'd be suprised at how much women at a hair salon downtown pay to see me dance with my shirt off. *rolls eyes*

thet was...
hilarious!
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  Posted on November 10, 2007 14:29
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Lol lap dance for money.

  Posted on November 12, 2007 02:21
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Sorry for only 1 chapter this weekend. I'll do better next weekend.

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  Posted on November 12, 2007 13:28
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yosh yosh
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  Posted on November 16, 2007 23:14
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'K everyone, expect the next Trick later on.

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  Posted on November 17, 2007 11:29
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Ok, now.....

Trick 5-Test Drive

It was time. Kai had been challenged by the leader of a group called Shadowlurk, seeing as him and Toriko had walked into their territory unannounced and unwanted. Outside the shop........

Toriko: Kai, you read for this? Let's face it, you know as much about ATs that I do, and if you havent figured it out yet, that's 0 knowledge, whatsoever.

Kai: Hey! Regardless of my grades, I'm a pretty fast learner. I figure I'll be fine.

Toriko: Just done die, cause if you do, then I'll have to be the one to take in all the tears from Maya and Kara..................then again, who needs living, right? Get out there, try not to die, BUT IF YOU DO, have no regrets!

Kai: *sighs* Dumbass!

Kraven: *followed by a group of Shadowlurk members* Kid, what's your name? I like to know who I'm crushing before I crush them.

Kai: Kai Nomino, your welcome. How many members are you using, cause I've got only 1, and that's me.

Kraven: Well.......I know that I can take you on easy by myself! But, I dont want to take any chances, so I'll use one other member.

Kai: Yeah, that's the reason. *rolls eyes*

Kraven: Now, hurry and get on your ATs, I'm in the mood to whip some serious ass today!

Kai: *struggles to put his ATs on* So.....where's the finish point again?

Kraven: The mall about 2 miles down the street. Think you can make it that far?

Kai: *stands up in his ATs* Only one way to find out, right?

Takamaru, the shop owner, stood in front of the 3 racers. The Parts War was up and ready to begin, and cameras surrounded it to give everyone on the Parts War homepage on the internet a real-time feed on the race.

Takamura: The Parts War between Kai and Shadowlurk will now....BEGIN! *throws his hands down*

Kraven/Shadowlurk Member(SLM): *shoot off, burning down the streets in an instant*

Kai: *struggles to start moving* Uh.....what the hell?

Toriko: Hey, Kai! The race! It started already!

Kai: I know, dammit! They're just not movin'! Are they voice activated or somethin'?

Takamaru: *sighs* No, you have to apply pressure to the tip of the AT!

Kai: Alright.......*suddenly shoots forward, his balance completely off* AAAAAAARRGHH!!!!!!!!

Against his will, Kai shoots down the street, his arms and legs flailing through the air like crazy. He skates up to a polle and puts his arms around it, sending him in circles around it continuously, then shoots off, gaining a little bit of balance.

Kai: Ok, that's something I dont wanna do....ever again.......huh? *looks ahead to see cars coming straight toward him* Dammit! I forgot that this street is still open! SHIIIIT!

The car hits Kai as he attempts to jump into the air, sending him twirling through the sky, completely out of control. Unfortunately, he lands right on another car.

Man w/car: What the hell?! Get off'a me ya hooligan!

Kai: Hey, turn around! I'm in a race, dumbass!

Man w/car: Like hell I will! *the hood of the car pops open, sending Kai through the air, once again.

Kai: *sighs* The thrill of flying through the air wares off after the 2nd time.......hmm? *look ahead to see a light pole* Alright.....this is my only chance!

Kai reaches for the pole and places his skates on it as he continuously skates round and round in the air, then sends himself shooting toward the ground. He lands, finally, balanced on his ATs and begins to ride down the street.

Kai: Alright......I think I've actually gotten a hold of myself!!! Now its time to kickass. *devilish smile*

Suddenly, a small spark of flame sets off ehind his skates, leaving a little bit of fire on the road Kai begins to shoot forward faster and faster, gaining on Shadowlurk.

Kraven: *looks back* What the fuck?! How the hell can that punk recover from all that time loss so quickly?!

SLM: I dont know....we'd better hurry!

Kraven: Like hell! I'd better hurry, YOU'd better go back there and stop him!

SLM: Uh, alright! *slows down, readying his fist for Kai*

Kai: *skates level with SLM* Yo! Ya miss me?!

SLM: I'll say that I'm suprised you could ride so fast for a first timer, but other than that, HELL NO! *charges toward Kai*

Kai: *ducks down and punches SLM in the stomach*

SLM: *lifts up his shirt, revealing body weights* Try again, punk! *knocks Kai across the face, sending him into a nearby fire hydrant*

Kai: ARGH!

The fire hydrant sets off the second Kai hits it, sending water through the air.

SLM: *stops and looks at the water* I have to take you out before I reunite with the boss.....so where are ya, kid?!

Suddenly, the water that was shooting through the air begins to turn into a heavy mist around the area. In the mist, two flames are seen, set off.

SLM: Fire......flame?!

Kai: *his wet hair hanging over his face* You've done bad......you've really pissed me off now.

SLM: *gulps*

Kai: Now.....you will BURN! *shoots toward SLM and begins to quickly spin around him over and over*

SLM is suddenly trapped in a large wall of fire, the blazing heat increasing more and more.

SLM: ARRRGH!!!!!

Kai: *laughs evily* That's right! Burn! Burn, bitch! HAHAHA! *coughs* Woah....what the fuck? Did I just say all that? Spazzed out for a second.

The fire fades, and SLM is found lying on the ground, severly injured for the burns.

Kai: Well, that takes care of that, doesnt it? *look ahead, seeing Kraven in the far distance* YOUR NEXT!

Kai shoots down the streets, his pursuit reaching its peak.

*End of Trick 5*

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Woot!lol

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  Posted on November 17, 2007 14:41
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A bit short but nice chapter.

  Posted on November 18, 2007 13:52
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Listen:

Due to the fact that I feel as if I should put more focus into Naruto: Inuzumauchi, and this isnt as nearly as popular as it, I've decided to put AG:SL on hold until I feel its right to continue. Sorry for the inconvenience.

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  Posted on November 18, 2007 15:56
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Nooooooooo

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Noo! This is better
  Posted on November 21, 2007 04:21
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lol, wow, didnt expect anybody to say it so early.

Anyway, I'll be starting AG:SL back up after I finish the current arc in Naruto: Inuzumauchi.

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