Air Gear: Sky Legend(On Hold)

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#1 So, you look at this topic and see that its just another fan-fic, right? Well, then, for those who've read Naruto: Inuzumauchi, you see that this fan-fic was made by me, so you decide to check it out. Welcome to my 2nd fan-fic creation, Air Gear: Sky Legend. This fan-fic, obviously, is based off an anime show called Air Gear. Just like Naruto: Inuzumauchi, all of these characters are made by myself, as well as the basic storyline. When you see my name as the maker of a fan-fic, you expect the same charm that NI has, right? I promise you, this wont disappoint. Note: Just because I've decided to make another fan-fic, this doesnt mean that I will not be making Naruto: Inuzumauchi chapters at all, it will continue. Another thing I've decided to do is warn all people about this fan-fic, as it may contain things that readers may not approve of: Language to Intense Language/ Sexual References/ Partial Nudity References/ Crude Humor/ Intense Violence/Comic Mischief/Suggestive Themes or Perverted Acts. Now, it's time to get to the real story talk. You may wonder: What the hell is Air Gear? Well, look at the following to learn about the story basics and terms of Air Gear that non-fans will need to know. __________________________________________________ Air Gear Terms(This will be a short dictionary-like section that whille be updated as new terms are added in the story so everyone can understand exactly what the story is about): 1. Air Trek: Also known as A.T.'s, Air Treks are technically roller blades. Roller blades, although, that have been modified with a special gear that allows the user to rocket at speeds unattainable by users of regular roller blades. A.T.'s have become especially popular among sports fans. These people use the A.T.'s as means of transportation, excercise, or one of the more popular uses: used in races/battles against other users of A.T.'s, called Storm Riders. 2. Storm Riders: Storm Riders are those extreme sports fans who use A.T.'s as means means of battle. Storm Riders gather teams and use them to battle/race other teams in competitions called Parts Wars. 3. Parts Wars: Two or so Storm Rider teams are able to compete in batles or races called Parts Wars. Parts Wars are not limited to simply races or fights. There are dozens of different types of PW's such as ballon chase, point race, and trick-off. Parts Wars usually have a purpose, to race for A.T.'s, A.T. parts, or team emblems. 4. Emblems: All official Storm Rider teams have emblems with the name of their team and a special design on them. Higher class teams' emblems are worth more and more in the world of Air Trek. Teams range from A-B-C-D-E-F, A being the higest ranking teams and F being the lowest ranking teams. Teams move up in ranks by winning PW's that they bet emblems in. __________________________________________________ Now, about the actual story: Air Gear, Sky Legend(AG:SL) follows the life of a 16 year old boy called Kai Nomino. Kai lived the normal life of a boy: School, friends, family, girls, the whole works. One day, though, during a class at his school, Kai overheard a couple of guys talking about a Parts War after school. Although originally against it, Kai decides to check out the PW. After watching it, Kai nearly immediately falls in love with the world of Air Trek. He soon gathers a team and enters the true world of A.T., determined to become one of the top ranked Storm Riders in the world of Air Trek. Along the way, he faces hardships, meets new faces, and finds out the power of the Kings and their Regalia, true strength of A.T.'s, and the danger of the lives of REAL Storm Riders. __________________________________________________ Main Character Pics: Kai(16 years old): Toriko(15 years old): Maya(16 years old): Kara(15 years old): Hirozumi(17 years old): Miyu(22 years old): Note: More will be added later as the "main" characters increase. And now, I bring you my next fan-fic creation ....(Note: Chapters, as in the manga, will be called tricks) __________________________________________________ Air Gear: Sky Legend Trick 1-Sucked into a New World MP3 Player: --- Welcome, to the world of Air Trek. Air Trek, what is it, you ask? Air Treks, or A.T.'s, are nothing more than simple rollerblades. These rollerblades, although, have modified with a special engine, no bigger than a tiny gear, that gives them the abilitiy to rocket at speeds that regular rollerblades could never dream of reaching. A.T.'s are the new craze. Their used for excercise, transportation, or just to have fun! One of the most popular uses, although, is for battle. A.T. users, called Storm Riders, gather other Storm Riders and form teams, fighting to become the top A.T. out there in competitions called Parts Wars. Fighting for supremacy, facing multiple hardships, discovering the truth behind the 8 Kings and their roads, risking their life in battles that could easily be their last, and putting their pride on the line. Welcome, to the World of Air Trek. --- That MP3 player was being listened to in the middle of a class at Hoshimaru High School. Two boys were listening to it closely in the middle of class, while the boy behind them, Kai Nomino, was being distracted by them. Boy 1: Sweet! So this is the life of a Storm Rider, huh? Boy 2: Not even, Ryu. This video doesnt begin to explain it, you have to really be a part of it to feel the true thrill. You can see the thrill after school, cause there's gonna be a D class Parts War around 59th avenue. Ryu: Sweet! Toutaka, who's gonna be the teams? Kai: Urgh, what the hell're you two talkin' about?! Shut up, I cant hear the teacher! Ryu: What do you mean "what're we talking about?" You've never heard of AT's? Kai: Of course I have, I'm just not into that junk. Toutaka: Yeah, you'd rather sit in here and take notes, hmm? Look around, Kai! Nobody else in the class even cares about "learning" and all. Only YOU. Kai: Your just askin' for an ass kicking, arent you!? Toutaka: Woah, calm down! All I'm saying is, why dont you tag along with us? There's gonna be a Parts War today, and I'm sure you'd fall in love with AT's once you learn about them. Ryu: Yeah, just this once. Not like you've got anything better to do, right? Kai: *sighs* Fine, fine! I'll come with you guys, but I promise you, its gonna just be a waste of my time. Toutaka: Awesome! Alright, just meet us in the middle of the schoolyard after class is over, alright? Kai: *nods* AT's.......if I'm lucky, it wont be a COMPLETE waste. The day wares on, and the school day ends. Just as he was told to, Kai walks out of the front of the school, heading to the middle of the yard to meet up with Toutaka and Ryu. Kai: I don teven know why I agreed to this....... Girl Voice: Kai! Hey, Kai! Wait up! Kai: Hmm? *turns around to see Kara running toward him* Heh, who else? Kara: *walks up beside Kai, panting* Hey there, where ya headed? Our house is that way! *points in the opposite direction* Kai: Ok, let's get something clear: It's MY house. I just let you and your sister live there while your parents are overseas. And who said I was headed to the house? Kara: Well, it's not like you have anywhere else to go, right? Kai: Actually, I do. You ever heard of AT's? Kara: Air Treks? Yeah, I've heard of'em.....I hear there's gonna be a race today. Is that where your headed? Kai: *nods* You bet. Kara: Ooo, I dont think you want to leave Maya and I alone in your house! Kai: W...why not? Kara: I might just raid all of your clothes drawers, I'm that kind of girl. *winks* Kai: D....dont you dare go in my room, you hear me! Kara: Heheh, see ya later! Dont get arrested at the race, alright?! *runs off* Kai: HOLD ON! I'm not done with you! Take one step in my room and I'll.........ugh, damn it all. Toutaka: *walks up behind Kai* Ho ho! I see you had to spend a little time with your girl, huh? Kai: What?! Ryu: Come on, the two of you have been friends for a long time, and for the past month you've even been LIVING together! So, how was your first time? Kai: *blushes* Shut it, assholes! You dont know our relationship like that! Toutaka: Ha! You just implied that there IS a relationship, right? Kai: *grabs Toutaka by the collar* Still want an ass kicking? *Due to the length of Trick, please look at the below post* Season 3 of my hit fan-fic, Naruto: Inuzumauchi(click here), has finally arrived! The legacy of NA's most popular fan-fic continues!

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#2 *Please look at the above post for the 1st part of this Trick* Toutaka: *chuckles* Heh, alright, we're done with our fun. Now come on, 59th avenue is just up ahead, we can get there in 10 minutes. We gotta hurry because these Parts Wars tend to start early, alright? Kai: *nods* Alright. *walks ahead* Toutaka/Ryu: *both put pressure on the nose of their shoes, causing their Air Treks to accelerate and shoot past Kai* You better run, noob! Kai: *sighs* I'm tempted to kill these punks....... The group walks and/or rides up to 59th avenue. They walk into the plaza where a ton of different storm riders from all over have come to se the race. In the middle of plaza is a large fountain, where most of the Storm Riders wait for the opposing teams to arrive. Kai: Damn.....there's a lot of people here......... Toutaka: What'd you expect? Air Trek isn't just a fad, it's global, man. Kai: So, you said two teams were gonna go at it, right? Ryu: That's right. The 3 man teamed Blade Dance VS. the 5 man teamed Haruawashi. Their both D-Ranked Storm Rider teams, and whoever wins is moving on to C-rank, so you can imagine how important this is to both teams. Kai: Hmm.....that's actually pretty organized. Toutaka: Heads up, the teams are entering from the opposite sides of the plaza! In the distance, the 2 Blade Dance members and their leader, Hirozumi Suchitaka, arrive in front of the fountain. On the opposite side, the leader of Haruawashi, Toji Kumata, leads his 4 members to the other side of the Fountain. The two leaders stand face to face, smirks across each of their faces. Hirozumi: So, is your team ready? Toji: As ready as we'll ever be. Hirozumi: I'm sorry if I seem rude, but I just really want to settle this already. Toji: Dont worry, we both know how important this is to both of our teams, so you can be as rude as you want. And now, I'll do the honors! *takes out his teams' emblem and slaps it on the fountain* Hirozumi: *takes out his teams' emblem and slaps on top of the Haruawashi emblem* Announcer: And the challenge is set! Kai: What'd he do? Toutaka: When one player places their emblem on another players emblem, that team has officially challenged them. That's how the battle starts. Announcer: Alright, this is a regular AT battle race between the teams Haruawashi and Blade Dance! No special regulations, just make it to the the target in time. Anything goes during the race, and the finish line is the Glum Slum on Brook Road! All teams ready?! Hirozumi: As we'll ever be. Announcer: 3....2....1....BEGIN! The two teams shoot down the street nearly instant. The large screens over the plaza light up, showing the race for all to watch. Ryu: Heh, pretty exciting huh? Kai: Yeah, I guess. Ryu: Good! Because the real fun hasnt even started yet! Look up on the screen! See, their all shooting down the streets, heading to the Glum Slum, but just being able to ride fast is only a part of the battle. Toutaka: The formation that some teams have is perfect for situations like this. See how Blade Dance is circling around Haruawashi? That's because they have to cover all of their bases due to their smaller number of members. Obviously they've been trained to take on more than on opponent at a time. Kai: Take on? Like, fight? Toutaka: Duh! You didnt expect them to just race, did you? Half of AT races like this is the fact that they do ANYTHING to win! Ryu: And when we say anything, if you dont understand us, just watch! In the actual race......... Hirozumi: Blade Dance! V Formation around the enemy! Hirozumi falls back behind the enemy while the other two members of Blade Dance skate up to their corners, forming a V. Toji: Dont allow them to attack, hit them with full force! Haruawashi Member 1: *falls back toward Hirozumi and takes out a night stick from his pocket* Hirozumi: *a blade rips through the arms of his shirt* Just had to keep that hidden for a second! *skates toward the Haruawashi Member(HM)* The two of them clash weapons, but Hirozumi pushes the HM back, sending him ahead of the group* Blade Dance(BD)Member: *pulls his arm back and slams HM1 in the back, causing him to lose balance and hit the ground, skidding across it* Toji: *leaps to the side and begins to skate sideways on a store wall* There goes one......but we still have the upper hand! 4 VS. 3! Hirozumi: *leaps high into the air and pulls his leg back* Urgh.......RGH! *he kicks toward Toji, sending a large crescent of red energy toward him* Kai: Woah! What the hell was that!? Ryu: Heh, that's the type of things that people who attempt to follow the Fang Road are capable of doing. Kai: Fang Road? What the hell're you talking about? Ryu: Shh, I cant watch with you talking! The crescent of energy shoots toward the wall the Toji was previously on, but Toji leaps off of the wall and toward Hirozumi before it is able to make contact with him. Both Toji and Hirozumi pull their fists back for a punch, clashing their fists. A large burst of the same red energy from before pushes both of them back, sending them down on the ground. Kai: Ok, what the hell was that? Hirozumi: *smiles* Well, Toji, looks like both of our teams have decided to push on toward the Glum Slum! What should we do? Toji: I say we settle our fight before moving on! The two of them charge at each other, preparing to clash once again. The battle was no longer between Blade Dance and Haruawashi, it was Toji and Hirozumi. *End of Trick 1* __________________________________________________ _____________ That's it for the 1st Trick, or chapter, or whatever you wanna call it. Hope you all enjoyed it, expect the next one later today, after get posts in the topic. Thanks for reading. Those sitting at their computer and are drinking something while reading this, let's make a toast to the start of what could be my 2nd hit fan-fic! Season 3 of my hit fan-fic, Naruto: Inuzumauchi(click here), has finally arrived! The legacy of NA's most popular fan-fic continues!

aneph Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 153 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#3 This is a great fan-fic also.I just love Air Gear.

XSanosuke Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 976 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#4 Omfg, Aneph, you LOVE Air Gear too! WOOT! Expect the next "Trick" later on. Season 3 of my hit fan-fic, Naruto: Inuzumauchi(click here), has finally arrived! The legacy of NA's most popular fan-fic continues!

aneph Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 153 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#5 Oh and your picture for Maya isn't working.

Itachi4x4(clone) Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 3746 Joined on: August 20, 2007

#6 this one owns too! Sis:Live_for_Sasuke =D Proud member of Untitled Clan

XSanosuke Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 976 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#7 Alright, here's the next Trick........... Trick 2-Determination The battle between the two Storm Rider Teams, Blade Dance and Haruawashi, continued. The two leaders of the groups, Hirozumi of Blade Dance and Toji of Haruawashi, had both agreed that before they truly tried to catch up with the group, they would fight. Technically, whoever won the battle between the two of them, their team would have a large upper hand. The two of them clashed weapons together, then thrusted each other back into walls of seperate stores on the street. Hirozumi: *skates forward a bit, then backflips and skates vertically up the wall* Toji: *while being sent toward the wall, he spins around and lands his hands on the wall* Heh....*he propels of the wall and turns around again, to see Hirozumi scaling the wall quickly* Wall ride, hmm? Hirozumi: *finally having reached the top, he looks down at Toji, a smirk on his face* Now, you can surely make it here, cant you? Toji: Like hell I cant! *he leaps into the air, and grabs hold of a light post. Toji begins to continuously spin on that post, gaining enough momentum to shoot himself up toward Hirozumi, kicking him in the stomach* Hirozumi: *is pushed back by the force* Toji: *takes of the spike collar around his neck* Hirozumi: What now? Toji: *he stretches out the collar, turning it into a full grown spiked whip* What do you think? I know we havent been fighting long, but I want to kick your ass quickly for I can help my team out! So, do you think your ready?! Hirozumi: *leans forward on his AT's and shoots toward Toji* Bring it, BITCH! Toji: *lashes his whip out toward Hirozumi, gashing his arm* Hirozumi: *continues to skate toward him, his eyes squinting from the pain* Toji: HA! *yanks his whip out, ripping Hirozumi's shoulder* Hirozumi: *the blood shoots out of his wound* ARGH! *his right shoulder hangs low* Toji: *shoots toward Hirozumi* There's goes your right half! Your arm wont be much help to you anymore! Hirozumi: Maybe that arm.......BUT MY LEFT! *he pulls his fist back and punches Toji across the face, sending him off the top of the building, into the air* At the plaza........ Kai: *watching on the screen* That's right, kick his ass! Toutaka: Getting into it, Kai? Kai: Huh? Oh, just a lil' excited, that's all.....can you blame me? Ryu: See, I told you you'd like it! Back at the race....... Hirozumi: *leaps into the air, toward Toji* That whip of yours.....it can immobilize my body parts, but only one at a time! Toji: *pulls back his whip and lashes it around Hirozumi's right leg* Hirozumi: Not a chance! *spins around while in the air and kicks him with his left leg* Toji is sent crashing toward the ground, his whip still ripping Hirozumi's leg, causing it to bleed heavily. While in the air, Toji flips around and lands on his feet.Hirozumi also falls to the ground, but he lands face first, due to his inured right leg. Toji: You brought that upon yourself! A wasted effort. Hirozumi: *rises to his feet, his head hanging low* Toji: Ha, you little shit! Your about as good as done, now! Back at the plaza...... Kai: What happened to his good attitude!? Ryu: I guess that was just in front of everybody. Now that the race has begun, Storm Riders show their true colors...... Toutaka: Shut up, I cant hear what's goin' on! Back at the race........... Toji: *prepares his whip and charges toward Hirozumi* That's right! Just stand there, wait for me to rip you to shreds! *lashes his whip toward Hirozumi* Hirozumi: *He lifts up his head, only to see the oncoming whip. He grabs the whip as it is only inches from his neck* Toji: Wh....what the hell? Hirozumi: *his hands begin to bleed from the spikes on the whip* Hirozumi clenches the whip, squeezing harder and harder until he completely snaps the whip in half. Toji: You.....YOU LITTLE SHIT! I'll kick your ass even worse now! *charges at him* Hirozumi: *quickly grabs Toji by the neck and headbutts him* Toji: *yells in pain, holding his head* Hirozumi: This "little shit" is gonna be the reason you lose this battle!*on his one good leg, he skates toward Toji and rams into his stomach, carrying him while skating* Toji: Argh! Hirozumi: *his AT's begin to spark a light red glow, as his speed picks up* Back at the plaza........ Kai: Wh...what's happening!? Toutaka: It's his speed......he must be one hell of a D-class! Back at the race.......... Hirozumi: *going at insane speeds down the road while still carrying Toji on his body frame, he grabs Toji by the collar and leaps into the air* HIrozumi pulls back his only good arm, his left. He punches Toji across the face, then spins around and kicks him in the stomach with his glowing AT's, sending him crashing into the ground, leaving a large crater. Announcer: And Hirozumi of Blade Dance seems to have risen against the odds! Although his right arm and left leg were both rendered useless before, he somehow was able to full taken on the leader of Haruawashi! Up ahead, Blade Dance is now outnumbered 2 to 1, not counting Hirozumi who is too far to catch up at this rate. Hirozumi: *lands on the ground and begins to shoot forward, his AT's still giving off that red glow as they reach higher and higher speeds. Back at the plaza, the entire crowd was cheering Hirozumi on as he, somehow, begins to catch up with the back ahead of him, burning down the track. Kai: WOOT! STICK TO'EM HIROZUMI! Ryu: This is gonna be one bitch of a close race, that's for sure. Toutaka: Will you two ever shut up?! Back at the race............. Less than 100 meters away from his other teammate and two of the Haruawashi members, Hirozumi continued to burst down the road. The Glum Slum was in sight, signaling that this race was next to over. HM1: *rams into the Blade Dance Member, causing him to trip up and fall, skidding backwards on the ground* Announcer: And the only other Blade Dance Member has been knocked down! This race is all up to Hirozumi now! Hirozumi was literally right in between the two Haruawashi Members, finally having caught up. His body was giving out on him, and his injured leg would not be able to hold up much longer. HM1&2: *both on opposite sides of Hirozumi, then grab their night sticks and slam them into Hirozumi's stomach. Hirozumi: *squints from the pain of the blow* HM2: Wh....what the hell?! Hirozumi: *grabs the night sticks and thrusts them down, sending both of the HM's onto the ground, left in his dust* Hirozumi crashed into the wall of the Glum Slum Shop, and soon fell to the ground due to intense pain on his body. The race was over, and the winner was Blade Dance. The crowd at the plaza went wild, cheering for the winner. Kai: HELL YEAH! That was the most kickass thing, I'VE EVER SEEN, IN MY LIFE! Toutaka: I'm sorry, have we met before? Arent you the guy who said this would just be a complete and total waste of time? Kai: Hey, I've been wrong before, right??? Announcer: As you've probably all found out by now, OUR WINNER IS BLADE DANCE! In a total suprise win, Hirozumi Suchitaka was nearly singlehandedly able to take out the entire Haruawashi team! An ambulance came to pick up all of the Storm Riders who had participated in the race. Although, when the ambulance came by the plaza again, Hirozumi was let off. He limped his way back to the fountain, and took both Blade Dance's emblem and the newly acquired, Haruawashi emblem. He held it up proudly, as the crowd cheered him on. Kai: So, not only got to keep his emblem, but also gets to take the Haruawashi emblem? Ryu: That's just about right. Toutaka: So, have you fallen in love with the world of Air Trek? Kai: ....................... Ryu: Hmm? Kai: I know that I've only just entered it........it all looks like a simple game to me. I dont know much about it, and I just think its some cool little game that their playing.........but yes. I think......I think I have. The day grew old, the sun was beginning to set. It was over, and Blade Dance, declared the winner. *End of Trick 2* ________________________________________________________________ Omfg, that one took a while, but I think it came out pretty damn awesomely. Hope you enjoyed the Trick. Season 3 of my hit fan-fic, Naruto: Inuzumauchi(click here), has finally arrived! The legacy of NA's most popular fan-fic continues!

raahim Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 3562 Joined on: June 26, 2007

#8 nicely done everything is well organized

aneph Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 153 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#9 Nice chap but the picture still says bandwidth exceeded.

XSanosuke Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 976 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#10 Ok, I just got a new picture of Maya all together. Ya like? And can you see it? Season 3 of my hit fan-fic, Naruto: Inuzumauchi(click here), has finally arrived! The legacy of NA's most popular fan-fic continues!

Itachi4x4(clone) Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 3746 Joined on: August 20, 2007

#11 awesome! oh and anyone who wants here is the pic of maya Sis:Live_for_Sasuke =D Proud member of Untitled Clan

XSanosuke Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 976 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#12 Dont worry Itachi, it was a different pic that wouldnt show up. I changed it, so its good now. BTW, thanks on the comment, the next trick'll be typed up after I'm done with this NI chapter. BTW again, I changed Kai's age to 16. Season 3 of my hit fan-fic, Naruto: Inuzumauchi(click here), has finally arrived! The legacy of NA's most popular fan-fic continues!

XSanosuke Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 976 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#13 Alright everyone, here's the next Trick........... Trick 3-Discovered Desire Not soon after Hirozumi had one the Parts War for Blade Dance, Kai and the other spectators headed home. At night, Kai was walking home alone, thinking about what he had seen today........ Kai: *looking up toward a light post* Hmm........Air Trek.......I cant believe something THAT kickass.....it's been hidden from me all this time. The way that Hirozumi shot down the street..........he rode up on those guys, as if he'd been doing it for years.......*looks up toward the stars* That's it! I cant stand it anymore, I gotta enter that world........enter the world of AT's! Girl's Voice: Who the hell're you talking to? Kai: Huh? Kai looked ahead to see Kara taking groceries out of the car in front of their house. He hadnt realized he already made it home. Kai: Heh, just havin' a little chat with Kai, that's all. Kara: *chuckles* Your so weird......hey, mind helping me out with these groceries? Kai: *walks over to the car and grabs a few bags* Kara: So, how was the Parts War? Kai: It was totally awesome! Ya know what, I think I'm gonna get into this Air Trek business myself! Kara: Wait, what? *walks into the house* You? Kai: *follows Kara* Yeah, what's up? I just thought it looked pretty cool, so, why not? Kara: Your probably the most uncordinated person of all time, that's why! Kai: I'm uncordinated? Like hell, you havent seen me on rollerblades before, ha....ARGH! *to busy arguing, he accidentaly runs into a table in the living room, and drops all of the groceries* Ugh! Kara: *sighs* You idiot! You just totally squashed all the bread we've got! Kai: Idiot? I'm an idiot? Who's the one standing over a perverted guy in a short skirt? *looking up Kara's skirt* Yeah, I reckon I got a pretty nice view. Kara: Huh? *blushes, pushes her skirt down and moves away from Kai* Y....YOU PERVERT! Voice: What the hell's going on down there, huh?! Maya, Kara's older sister, comes downstairs, looking at the situation. Maya: *grabs Kai and, although he's taller than her, jacks him up by the collar* What'd you do to my sister, huh?! Kai: Hey, she stood over me, alright?! It's obviously not my fault as I'm just a teenage guy! What'd you expect! Maya: *throws Kai across the room, into the wall* Get some restraint, dumbass! Kai: Argh! *looks up at Kara, who quickly moves out of the way again* Dammit, this is my house! You two are lucky I'm even letting you stay here, you cant treat me like shit! Maya: *bends down to Kai* What're you gonna do about it? It's not as if you've got any authority in this house, anyway. Kara: M...Maya! I think that's enough, I was just talking about him being perverted, you didnt have to hurt him like that! Kai: Oh, so NOW you wanna protect me? You were the cause of this! Maya: Your askin' for more, kid! Kai: *stands up* Maya: And exactly what were you doing out so late? Kai: I was at a Parts War, like its any of your business. Maya: Huh? YOU went to a Parts War? Kai: Yeah, why? Maya: Who was battling? Kara: Maya, does it matter? Kai: Yeah, since when were you into AT's? Maya: I happen to be pretty damn good Storm Rider myself, thank you. Now, it was Haruawashi VS. Blade Dance, right? I heard about it on the Parts War homepage, on the internet. I, sadly, had to fill out some college applications, so, didnt have much time do go to it. Kai: Hold on, let's rewind, shall we? How come you never told me that you were a Storm Rider? Maya: *begins to walk away* Didnt think it really mattered. Kara: Well, that's a real coincidence. Maya: *turns around, her hands on her hips* What? Kai: I've decided that I'm gonna be a Storm Rider! Maya: ..........*suddenly bursts into laughter* Kai: *blank face* Kara: ...Did I miss something? Maya: *attempts to calm down from laughing* Ok.....ok....ok, you! You said that YOU want to be a Storm Rider? You, of all people?! Kai: Yeah, what's up? Maya: Sorry, but your like, but you've got the worst reflexes of all time! Kai: I've heard something like that before...........and I cant totally pull off something like this! Maya: Oh, yeah? Then exactly how do you plan on getting AT's? Kai: Heh...see, that's the thing. I was gonna ask you and Kara for some cas..... Maya: Aw, hell nah! I've got priorities, there's no way I'm wasting money on you. Kai: But see, look at this...*ruffles through his jacket and pulls out a AT magazine* See, a friend at school gave me this. I found the perfect pair! Maya: *bends over and looks into the magazine* Hmm......heh, that's a pretty nice pair, I'll admit. Kai: *secretly looks into Maya's shirt as she bends over* Yeah......it is a nice pair. *devilish smile* Maya: *quickly grabs Kai by the neck and begins to squeeze* I could kill you right now, you know that?! Kara: *sighs* Damn it, you guys! Keep this up and the neighbors'll complain again! Maya: *lets go of Kai's neck* Either way, those things cost 85 bucks! Find a way to get them yourself. Kai: *sighs* Fine, I will. Maya: Now, you still havent answered my question. Who won the Parts War? Kai: Huh? Oh, it was awesome! See, I recorded it on my phone, check it. The phone plays Hirozumi finishing off Toji, then the entire chase that he did to catch up with the Haruawashi members, and win the war. Maya: Damn, now I feel bad for missing out on the battle! Kai: Heh. Maya: Kai.....you know what? I, as I've already told you, wont be giving you any cash to help with your AT fund. ALTHOUGH, I guess there are other ways I can help you. Kai: You really mean it? Maya: No lie. *pulls a small piece of paper from her shirt, then hands it to Kai* Kai: What's this? Maya: If you want to become a Storm Rider for real, go to this address tomorrow. That's a pretty good place to get ATs. Kai: Heh, thanks. Maya: *winks* Dont mention it! But in return, just make sure you come back alive, alright? Kai: Say what? Maya: *giggles, while walking away* Nothing! Nothing! See ya later, I'm beat. *walks upstairs* Kara: What could she mean by that? Kai: Dont know, dont care. I'm gettin' myself a pair of ATs! I'll check ya later, 'k? *runs upstairs toward his room* Kara: Dinners' in an hour, alright?! Kai/Maya's Voice: *yelling* Yeah, whatever, mom! Kara: HEY! I'm younger than both of you! *sighs* Those two........I've got no idea what to do with them. *walks out of the room as well* *End of Trick 3* ________________________________________________________________ For all those people who are pretty numb in the head reading this, Kara is not their mom. She just acted like the mom figure in the Trick, thus, that's what they called her.lol Hope you enjoyed the Trick. Season 3 of my hit fan-fic, Naruto: Inuzumauchi(click here), has finally arrived! The legacy of NA's most popular fan-fic continues!

Itachi4x4(clone) Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 3746 Joined on: August 20, 2007

#14 *winks* Dont mention it! But in return, just make sure you come back alive, alright? thet line was so funny! Sis:Live_for_Sasuke =D Proud member of Untitled Clan

aneph Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 153 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#15 Great chap and the picture is working now.

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