The First Throne (Book Ideas suggestions)


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  Posted on November 27, 2011 21:04
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Hey boarders =) I'm recently starting to write a fantasy book. But to make it more people attractive, I would like to ask for your help, and know your opinions about this project.

What it is about
The top student of the academy finishes his graduation two years earlier, by the age of 16, and is right away assign to the King's and Castle's main guard, the Warriors, which are led by his sister. What he doesn't know, is that the King's guard is just a cover up of the true goals of the Warriors, to kill and destroy the King's empire itself, that involves the main character in a whole new and dangerous adventure, of which he never wished to start.

So, what I'm asking here is for characters and story courses ideas.
To be easier to organize, I'll leave below a for to be filled by each character that you wish to be :)

Character Form
Name: (I suggest a site(click) that generates names, which has the type of names I wish)
Race: (Between Human, Elf, Orc, Dark Elf and Dwarf)
Role:
History Influence: (when will you appear, what will you do/did, friend/enemy)
Personality:
Characteristics:
Others:

Main Roles Missing
Main Kingdoms leaders (0/7)
The 8 Heroes of the Continent (0/8)
The Dwarfs Pentagon (0/4)
The Elf Embassor (0/1)

Of course this are only the main characters needed at the moment. Again, any other suggestions accepted.

If requested, I can post chapters or parts of the story for as long as I write them.

As in any other post, all the NB are applied. If you haven't read them, do so here
  Posted on November 27, 2011 21:11
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Character Form
Name: Teri
Race: Elf Princess
Role: Must be saved from bad guys in war!
History Influence: (Appear in a dream. Asking for help, at beginning, Whatever Teri gets paid to do. You are my friend.
Personality: Shallow, needy, cries a lot.
Characteristics: Beautiful.
Others:
Her love is on the bad side, but, not by choice!
And you must save them both!


GOGO.
BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE!
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  Posted on November 27, 2011 21:12
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how about the crystal or what about he.hmm i give up but i do have one thing to contribute his name could be stan and he could be the strong quiet moody type.
:side note asking these people for idea's is worse than you writing a story about a crystal
:smile
  Posted on November 27, 2011 21:15
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_Misty_ wrote:
how about the crystal or what about he.hmm i give up but i do have one thing to contribute his name could be stan and he could be the strong quiet moody type.
:side note asking these people for idea's is worse than you writing a story about a crystal
:smile
For what I've seen before this people are very creative and good ideas givers, and it doesn't really has to be a crystal, just didn't had another name to give to it :P
Thanks for the main chars idea, despite I wish for medieval/fantasy type names, not modern ones :blink
  Posted on November 27, 2011 21:16
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dodiandre wrote:
_Misty_ wrote:
how about the crystal or what about he.hmm i give up but i do have one thing to contribute his name could be stan and he could be the strong quiet moody type.
:side note asking these people for idea's is worse than you writing a story about a crystal
:smile
For what I've seen before this people are very creative and good ideas givers, and it doesn't really has to be a crystal, just didn't had another name to give to it :P
Thanks for the main chars idea, despite I wish for medieval/fantasy type names, not modern ones :blink
Roewyn
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  Posted on November 27, 2011 21:25
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Name: Malak Amav (pronouced maah-lack uh-mawv)
Race: Dark Elf
Role: One of the antagonists, at one point, he captures someone close to the main character in order to lure him into his trap
History Influence: Enemy, tries to steal the stone at first but gets caught, and what I just said above
Personality: Mysterious and cunning, never afraid to taunt and insult and outsmart his opponents
Characteristics: Snake-like appearance, dark grey body with Medusa-like hair, big red eyes and wears a black cape
Others: None?
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  Posted on November 29, 2011 21:22
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__miss*fail__ wrote:
Character Form
Name: Teri
Race: Elf Princess
Role: Must be saved from bad guys in war!
History Influence: (Appear in a dream. Asking for help, at beginning, Whatever Teri gets paid to do. You are my friend.
Personality: Shallow, needy, cries a lot.
Characteristics: Beautiful.
Others:
Her love is on the bad side, but, not by choice!
And you must save them both!


GOGO.
BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE!
Luxvan wrote:
Name: Malak Amav (pronouced maah-lack uh-mawv)
Race: Dark Elf
Role: One of the antagonists, at one point, he captures someone close to the main character in order to lure him into his trap
History Influence: Enemy, tries to steal the stone at first but gets caught, and what I just said above
Personality: Mysterious and cunning, never afraid to taunt and insult and outsmart his opponents
Characteristics: Snake-like appearance, dark grey body with Medusa-like hair, big red eyes and wears a black cape
Others: None?

Characters accepted =)

Book title ideas - Stone's name? Main char name? Or something else? =P
  Posted on November 30, 2011 02:02
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Name: Nide
Race:Half Elf, Half Human
Role:A foot runner for an antagonist who wishes for anarchy within all seven kingdoms. She makes errands at various times of day which are strange, but makes even stranger excuses for the items she asks for.

History Influence:Will first appear new a volcano, gathering volcanic ash from a recent explosion of lava. Nide will hum songs or common nursery rythmes, speaking only if spoken to first. She could be considered as a friend until her connection with the antagonist is known. (when will you appear, what will you do/did, friend/enemy)
Personality:She is a kind woman, until one attempts to steal what she is getting for her misstress. She has dark magic learned from her human roots, and applied with her other elfin half. She will cast either a water spell or a concealing spell, depending on the situation. She knows much more, but tries to hide her true ability. She shows loyalty to her master by belittling her power, and only revealing her true colors when asked to do so. To strangers she looked nothing more than a homeless girl, in a continuous child state of mind. She may cross paths with main characters, but she won't become a threat until her master becomes one as well.

Characteristics: Vitriolic when the time is right; Affable during most times.
She has dark chestnut hair with small, blue eyes. Her looks compare more with her human half, with rough, tanned skin. Her fingers are slim and she is a fairly light weight woman. She has the clothing of a lower-classmen. She is nearing her hundredth birthday but still looks as young as 14 to some.

Others:Bares a deep scar that shines blue whenever she nears a king or someone of royal blood.

(Will add master soon : ] ) Done~ I feel like Nide is a much stronger made character than Cadelian. Feel free to fix as you may.
Name: Cadelian

Race: Full dark elf

Role: A antagonist that stays under the radar. She prefers quiet until her plans are meant to be put into public. She has a servant called Nide. Nide usually obtains all the things Cadelian needs for her potions and plans.
History Influence:Cadelian appears at the worst time possible for protagonist. She takes full advantage of whatever situation calls for a protagonist to plummet into weakness. She has no true morals and kills in cold blood. She, in contrast to the previous statement, will use what she calls a "mercy system". She will give the prisoner "points" for each thing s/he does for Cadelain. Like most evil characters in a story, her promises are rarely held to truth, and kills them after they are of no use of her anymore. This a true enemy to anyone for the unity and organization of the seven kingdoms.

Personality:Cadelain was born into a dying sect of her race. They believed in chaos and equal share of pain. They had an animistic view on religion, and used the Earth as it used them. They were of a peaceful kind, until the forests had been torn down. She was shunned for not going with the rest of the family to march outside of the forest and stop the humans and Dwarfs from cutting down the trees, disowning her. They wanted to preserve the forests, but the other races(expect a small percentage of orcs) disagreed. The war began ten years ago, and was called lost three years ago. At given times in the war, her mother would come back and mock, lie, and try and persuade her to join with her family. After a certain amount of time had passed, she left to an emptied forest and thousands of dead dark elfs. Afraid to go out ever since, she hides in the depths of a cave, hand carved by her dark magic.

Characteristics: Cold, often mean to any character, with no exception for Nide. Enjoys the feeling of pain and witnessing it. Has dark skin with dark elf markings, and black hair. Cold white eyes are coupled with a narrow nose and a small face. She has a slender, but full, figure. Her skin is very smooth. On a rare occasion, you may see her in the forest, praying or gathering a few items only dark elfs can touch. When alone, and in her own state, she can sometimes revert to a child version of herself. To skimp over the physiological analysis of it all, deep down inside, there is still pieces of her old self inside of her.

Others:Has the same strange glowing scar as Nide, in which a scar on her hand glows blue when meeting with royal blood. She claims to know what it means, though, she seems to look for more answers to that question than giving them.


Suggestion for a names: Oracles, ____'s Stable
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  Posted on November 30, 2011 19:07
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Wow, thank you for those two characters, they will sure help me alot with the evil part of the book =)

Characters accepted
  Posted on December 15, 2011 20:18
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So, I've got like, almost a chapter done (in my home-town language). I'd like to know if someone (anyone) would think it would be a good idea, or that like to read it, so I post it in here in English. If not, I won't spend time translating it to english =)

EDIT: Topic title changed to Book's title
  Posted on December 15, 2011 20:39
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As a suggestion try avoid story stereotypical ideas in books like using elves and ogres.
Anyway I prefer protagonists that are just your average people not some super-powerful person.

Name: Leonard

Race: Human

Role: A demon hunter or badass anti-hero
history influence: Anti-hero/unlikely ally appears in the middle of the story saving the main character with his awesome sword skills

Personality: He has a stoic personality. Often seen as emotionless in the way he kills his opponents.

Characteristics: He wears a grey trench-coat and walks with an air of confidence.
His goals are not know and he apparently has done something to gain an extraordinary amount of power despite being a human.

As a book's title try Darkness Rising or something Gothic.
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  Posted on December 15, 2011 20:50
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sasukechojineji wrote:
As a suggestion try avoid story stereotypical ideas in books like using elves and ogres.
Anyway I prefer protagonists that are just your average people not some super-powerful person.

Name: Leonard

Race: Human

Role: A demon hunter or badass anti-hero
history influence: Anti-hero/unlikely ally appears in the middle of the story saving the main character with his awesome sword skills

Personality: He has a stoic personality. Often seen as emotionless in the way he kills his opponents.

Characteristics: He wears a grey trench-coat and walks with an air of confidence.
His goals are not know and he apparently has done something to gain an extraordinary amount of power despite being a human.

As a book's title try Darkness Rising or something Gothic.
It is supposed to be a fantasy book v-v''. Elfs and Orcs do part of someone's imagination world. But I don't plan to do anything too super powerish, neither the usual pretty face enchanted elfs that are often seen around movies. I plan to make them somewhat different, not so perfect and beautiful, but outsmarting others and making someone doing something they didn't want to.
So, shortning, it won't be usual super powered Elfs/Orcs and stuff like that, it will be different :)

About character, nice, nice =). Will use
  Posted on October 28, 2012 01:24
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Name: Deveneth

Race: (Between Human, Elf, Orc, Dark Elf and Dwarf): Fuck you, there's no Blood Elf! Nor Undead. D: Okay well... ehm, Dark Elf is the closest to Blood Elf.

Role: A Warlock who has been experimenting for years with destructive spells and shadow magic, sending all sorts of chimeras out on the open,For now, his goal is to create an ultimate Lich, at his command.

History Influence: (when will you appear, what will you do/did, friend/enemy): He's been traveling trough many villages in search of a victim for his "cult". He started out small, with just alchemy and demonic books but as time passed he became weary of his powers and used them for his purposes. Nothing to attract too much attention though, so many are not aware for their surroundings. Usually hiding in small places, he can rarely be found. Although, some people have seen him, talked to him and even followed him at some point, he can indeed become a powerful ally to who befriends him. Except.. Loyalty is not his good side. If an ally is weak, he'll take advantage of him, if he gets a better offer, he'll gladly betray them. With his latest victim research, he found out something interesting about him/her.. Which got his attention to .. stall a bit more. Eventually, he introduces himself to him/her, giving a warm smile. He'll "friend" anyone who he manages enslave mentally. If in a party, he'll make sure to chain his enemies, playing with them in his mind, torturing. If needed, he'll even summon minions to fight for his allies. No doubt though, that he'll slaughter anyone who gets too curious.

Personality: An Elf who uses his looks to his advantage. Manipulates people to his greedy hands. He can daydream quite often though, as well as get mad when someone is right, which usually ends up the person being killed.

Characteristics:Dirty-minded, Cold at some point, really long dark red hair, black cape with a hood and some purple spiky lines. Small fangs, long painted nails, yellow cat eyes. Easy mood change.

Others: If you put him as a character who got befriended by one of the protagonists (as I said, if you can keep his trust) he'll become one too. If not, he'll be a side character who appears later in the story being one of the antagonists.
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  Posted on October 28, 2012 01:30
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sonja77 wrote:
Name: Deveneth

Race: (Between Human, Elf, Orc, Dark Elf and Dwarf): Fuck you, there's no Blood Elf! Nor Undead. D: Okay well... ehm, Dark Elf is the closest to Blood Elf.

Role: A Warlock who has been experimenting for years with destructive spells and shadow magic, sending all sorts of chimeras out on the open,For now, his goal is to create an ultimate Lich, at his command.

History Influence: (when will you appear, what will you do/did, friend/enemy): He's been traveling trough many villages in search of a victim for his "cult". He started out small, with just alchemy and demonic books but as time passed he became weary of his powers and used them for his purposes. Nothing to attract too much attention though, so many are not aware for their surroundings. Usually hiding in small places, he can rarely be found. Although, some people have seen him, talked to him and even followed him at some point, he can indeed become a powerful ally to who befriends him. Except.. Loyalty is not his good side. If an ally is weak, he'll take advantage of him, if he gets a better offer, he'll gladly betray them. With his latest victim research, he found out something interesting about him/her.. Which got his attention to .. stall a bit more. Eventually, he introduces himself to him/her, giving a warm smile. He'll "friend" anyone who he manages enslave mentally. If in a party, he'll make sure to chain his enemies, playing with them in his mind, torturing. If needed, he'll even summon minions to fight for his allies. No doubt though, that he'll slaughter anyone who gets too curious.

Personality: An Elf who uses his looks to his advantage. Manipulates people to his greedy hands. He can daydream quite often though, as well as get mad when someone is right, which usually ends up the person being killed.

Characteristics:Dirty-minded, Cold at some point, really long dark red hair, black cape with a hood and some purple spiky lines. Small fangs, long painted nails, yellow cat eyes. Easy mood change.

Others: If you put him as a character who got befriended by one of the protagonists (as I said, if you can keep his trust) he'll become one too. If not, he'll be a side character who appears later in the story being one of the antagonists.
good enough x)

I'll actually update this topic now :p
  Posted on October 28, 2012 01:48
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Update:
-Book title changed to it's current name
-"What it is about" section updated to the current theme of the book