I Breathe Life

Prodigal_Son Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 7 Joined on: September 6, 2010

#1 I Breathe Life a Poem by The "Prodigal" Son What happened to land? What happened to the life? It has become barren. Everything dead, finished, The tall tower isn’t so tall. Bricks missing, broken down. Hard work rotting, being taken. Ivy climbing an ancient work. Who made this land? Why is it gone? The creator, a god, mind of all Taken away, it falls lifeless. As I return to my world, I bring the life all have sought. Raise my tower, ivy falter. I am here, I breathe life. Is it a return, or a beginning?

tisdale3 Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 9345 Joined on: July 17, 2007

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masterhanzo Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3119 Joined on: February 3, 2007

#3 nice ever thought of being a poet? Trust Hurts Betrayal Kills... To Destroy, Decimate and Devour... Farewell Topic... Can't you hear them? Can you not? The voices of the dead welcomes you.

*-serenity*- Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 508 Joined on: July 13, 2010

#4 awesome 10/10:noworry

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RawrBeThyName Rank: member Forum Rank: Chuunin Posts: 307 Joined on: September 1, 2010

#6 The concept is brilliant, although your word-flow faltered here and there, it was quite amazing. Retired 11.7.2010

Prodigal_Son Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 7 Joined on: September 6, 2010

#7 masterhanzo wrote: nice ever thought of being a poet? Only once or twice. Is it a return, or a beginning?

knightmare123 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1879 Joined on: May 21, 2010

#8 9/10:amazed Very smexy, That must have taken you quite some time ^_^ ||N-B Bro DeathShadow||

LILDEE1995 Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 747 Joined on: November 26, 2007

#9 i never liked poems until this one 10/10:cry Hey Hey A Hymm To Humanity. Love Has Gone People Are You Worried?!?

narutofan_saske Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3078 Joined on: June 9, 2007

#10 Art is useless in a corrupted and materialistic world. 9/10 My rating is also useless as I doubt it will ever be of use and is just a way to boost one's self-esteem of their skills.

Prodigal_Son Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 7 Joined on: September 6, 2010

#11 narutofan_saske wrote: Art is useless in a corrupted and materialistic world. 9/10 My rating is also useless as I doubt it will ever be of use and is just a way to boost one's self-esteem of their skills. Corruption is an opinion. Art is the only thing that is true. Is it a return, or a beginning?

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