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Posted on July 20, 2010 07:28

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Title: Inevitable Pain

Im thinking here about what a life i have.
Im floating in a pool of darkness,
cold presses in on me and im alone floating aimlessly.
Sometimes i ache with sorrow and i want to escape this prison of hatred.
I only crave to be free and to be heard and loved!
No one will never understand me because thats is true pain.
Besides people will never come face to face with pain,
because pain is inevitable.

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Posted on July 20, 2010 07:30

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Posted on July 20, 2010 07:30

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Posted on July 20, 2010 07:31

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I love it.I cant figure out what type of tone youre trying to mak though

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Posted on July 20, 2010 07:36

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8/10 .

Posted on July 20, 2010 07:43

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7/10

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Posted on July 20, 2010 07:49

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10/10 you wrote exactly how i feel

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Posted on July 21, 2010 02:12

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8/10 good bro

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Posted on October 18, 2010 06:14

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True and good poem just a minor gramatical mistake.

"No one will never understand me because thats is true pain."

Double negative means that everyone will understand your pain. So it should be "ever".

8/10

A lot of people understand that pain.

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