Lazy Poem: Beside Her

Lazy_Genius_13 Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 17427 Joined on: October 4, 2007

#1 here's another poem, read, rate, critique... Beside Her Thank you for caring, For sitting by my side Though you couldn't steer You stayed for the ride To keep my eyes forward Focused on the goal As I kept yearning For you made me whole Thank you for watching Setting yourself, to my right You held back from prying Though you kept me in your sight Thank you for caring Sitting beside me Thank you for watching It meant the world, To me ~Lazy_Genius_13 (3/17/10) It might be understood a bit better if you have some of the back story, so here's an entry from my journal. For some reason I still find Hunter irresistable, and it pains me. As I sat by her today she seemed distressed so ater asking and offering aid I sat there and waited to see if she would open up and allow me to at least listen. She didn't talk but at the end of lunch she smiled and said 'Thank you for sitting with me' 3/3/10 ¦¦ ℓαzу© ¦¦ Would you accompany me, to the edge of the sea... ¦¦ ¦¦Teams ¦ Etre le coup de foudre ¦ Foundations ¦¦

-Inn0c3ncE- Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 51 Joined on: March 10, 2010

#2 How nice .. I love it .. - Banned from the Naruto-Boards' forums -

The_Jokers_Hand Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 4260 Joined on: November 3, 2007

#3 It's an alright poem 7/10 IMO Tournaments won:27 Tag By Me

andoskull Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 4316 Joined on: August 24, 2007

#4 Awww, I love it. ^^ So cute. 10/10 ||The true Ichigo whore|Andy�||ig�?-?????||Back||?This Is True Love?|| ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ -||Ava by myself||-||Both Iconsig(s) by myself||- My Second CC :D||-||My little Brochacho||-||Bye Brosef||-

deathshadowdie12 Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 6850 Joined on: December 13, 2009

#5 this is great:amused Epicness II My Forum Games: (20) II Find me on WoN II Music ♪ -Hope you'll be back someday ^^ -Mirrory

sasori308 Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 969 Joined on: October 27, 2008

#6 aww i love it 9.5/10

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#7 i don't like it at all @.@ dunno why, just..i don't like..sorry 2/10 > ~ LATEST CHARACTER ~ > ~ MODS LOVE THEIR JOB FOR ONE REASON ~ EPICNESS SIG BY MEE \o/ � Music is my life � deviantART :3

itachiforlyf Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 776 Joined on: October 5, 2008

#8 amazing lazy. 9/10 my song another song Poem Another poem Yet another poem STORY

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#9 Lazy_Genius_13 wrote: here's another poem, read, rate, critique... Beside Her Thank you for caring, For sitting by my side Though you couldn't steer You stayed for the ride To keep my eyes forward Focused on the goal As I kept yearning For you made me whole Thank you for watching Setting yourself, to my right You held back from prying Though you kept me in your sight Thank you for caring Sitting beside me Thank you for watching It meant the world, To me ~Lazy_Genius_13 (3/17/10) It might be understood a bit better if you have some of the back story, so here's an entry from my journal. For some reason I still find Hunter irresistable, and it pains me. As I sat by her today she seemed distressed so ater asking and offering aid I sat there and waited to see if she would open up and allow me to at least listen. She didn't talk but at the end of lunch she smiled and said 'Thank you for sitting with me' 3/3/10 ur making me cry Tournaments Won:5 and a half kennykazuha wrote: Consistent with Greatness, Why Hate? ＳＨＵＴ　ＵＰ　ＡＮＤ　ＥＮＪＯＹ　ＴＨＥ　ＭＵＳＩＣ！ ╭∩╮（︶︿︶）╭∩╮. Recent tourneys: 1st Sacred Union tournament Runner-up

Mirrorforce Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 10365 Joined on: December 8, 2007

#10 That's so sad Lazy, love does hurt but we must learn to control our emotions so it doesn't kill us Nice poem by the way, 9/10 My Love <3 / Thanks for the tag gift Ginny and Tsu X3

MOBJOBNARUTO Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3629 Joined on: August 8, 2008

#11 9/10. Nice poem. Avatar By: Cartoon11 II Gimp User II

PhineasPhreak Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 4320 Joined on: December 4, 2008

#12 Mirrorforce wrote: That's so sad Lazy, love does hurt but we must learn to control our emotions so it doesn't kill us Nice poem by the way, 9/10 I love the poem, its short and simple. But effective. Critiscism: The poem did look as if it was forced to rhyme... 54 free avatars dump. I gots four MOABs, you jelly?

Whitney Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 8699 Joined on: September 26, 2007

#13 I think it's really sweet, whoever it's about. The last line, to me. Seems a bit out of flow, but even so I love it just like the rest. || Dassy and I || <3 <3 <3 || Die and I <3 || My angel, my goddess and always my perfection.I love you with all my heart as I know you love me. Forever and always. Thank you. I'm sure you know many reasons for my thanks. Love, Michael. aka Moo. || Avatar/Icon showcase/shop || Mikey and I || Aya and I ||

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#14 andoskull wrote: Awww, I love it. ^^ So cute. 10/10 lol...man ur a gay:huh

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#15 its flawless and awesome ||Gfxer||call me Shawn(H.B.S)||retired from gfx for now||Avy by me|| ||R.I.P Sasuke||I love literature||itachi, minato and kakashi fan||

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