Ari's poem - Harmony

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 11056 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#1 This endless babbling and persistent strife that resonates louder than thoughts and honest alone, why do they soar so high above what matters? There’s a song I wish to listen blissfully to but sadly that has become too hard a task. Is the path which I walk on truly incorrect? Is one incident suppose to define a whole? Or is it meant to separate the temptations from the sins? Just like the beating of one’s heart, the medium of the soul and body, those words --that song— I desire to hear is being tossed about without an end. What truth is to besiege you ---while your eyes are shut? Why do we fail to listen to the frail music? Transitioning into darkness bear without any love and peace, compassion and empathy are words that fail to mirror that one song. - Read the poem, read it again, connect it to harmony and everything or just about everything should start to make connections. I couldn't help writing it Akiko Shikata's just pure inspiration in every sense, anyways constructively comment and/or criticize please.

kismie124 Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 17058 Joined on: April 5, 2009

#2 A lot of questions is asked in this poem Nice one Ari* *Cough*

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 11056 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#3 kismie124 wrote: A lot of questions is asked in this poem Nice one Ari* *Cough* I wrote it this way for a reason. Thanks by the way.

ts_faraz Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 8497 Joined on: June 1, 2009

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nuckleheadninja Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1798 Joined on: April 24, 2008

#5 wow....deep, interesting inspiration, but it surrounds everything am I right? Awesome as usual! Smile :) Beauty ~Sharky my darling, you've left this space so desolate~</3 No I didn't!. Stop assuming things. ~Sharky

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 11056 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#6 nuckleheadninja wrote: wow....deep, interesting inspiration, but it surrounds everything am I right? Awesome as usual! Thank you.

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