Poetry which is meant to be ignored


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  Posted on March 16, 2010 22:44
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Didn't turned my face towards poetry for a long time, but i found the time and the mood to bring some poems to the NB community, hope they won't depress too much.



Regret

Everything is gone, we only exist in the past.
Memories, the mirror which shows us lost happiness.
I don't know why those times had to end, but i regret,
Living them gave me unspoken truth and salvation,
but reminding them tears me apart.
Why do i have to be weak? Didn't i tried everything to grow strong?
But it wasn't enough, i am caught in regret.
My fear will swallow my needs and destroy my dreams.
Life didn't even started yet and i am already dead.



Drowning

Drowning in my tears but i don't fear them,
They are the only obsession that proves me life.
I walked and walked, but happiness was never my companion,
I fell so many times, i can't count anymore.
Looking back the appearance of nothingness,
Looking forward into the darkness that swallows me,
The present hasn't any meaning for me.
I have given up, i can't see the sense,
I will drown myself in sorrow cause joy won't give me shit.
  Posted on March 16, 2010 22:45
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I like Regret, but Drowning one is just (Twitch)
Be Paranormal
Haters Whispering ~


<3~Das
  Posted on March 17, 2010 20:20
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thanks for reading them :amused
  Posted on March 19, 2010 05:40
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those are sad..but hey if its what you feel
i cant criticise :smile

and good poems too...they really outline how
we can all sometimes feel....
~sigless simplicity~
  Posted on March 20, 2010 15:40
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thanks for the comment, its nice to hear that people can empathize with my poems :amused