Another for the classes


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  Posted on March 16, 2010 07:05
nuckleheadninja
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Another for my writing class, share your thoughts if you wish......


Our time was waisted in vain.
Its time to end this empty pain.
This secret was the final dividend.
And there's no way we can pretend.
It all just never happened.

I can't watch your squirm anymore.
It's my time to explore.
The past you always ignored.
You allowed those around you to be deceived.
That this curse you received.
Just faded away.

But time came to show.
That this disruptive flow.
Isn't yours to hold.
You just walked away.
And forgot that day,but you still lost control.

I took the wheel.
And belived you truly could feel.
Those fake emotions your revealed to me.
I saw your tell. I saw your "hell"
It's nothing you said it to be.

And in the end.
The basin of forgiveness.
is Tainted with your fatal lies.
So stop those fake eyes.
It's time to realize I don't need you anymore.
Smile :) Beauty
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~Sharky my darling, you've left this space so desolate~</3
No I didn't!. Stop assuming things. ~Sharky :cry
  Posted on March 16, 2010 07:05
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8 nice poem :amused
  Posted on March 16, 2010 07:07
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good i guess:oh
i only read the first verse:push
90/100
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  Posted on March 16, 2010 07:08
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Onlinemaster23 wrote:
good i guess:oh
i only read the first verse:push
90/100
Me too e_e .
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  Posted on March 16, 2010 07:12
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seriously? thats just stupid, a poem cant be told from one verse.
Smile :) Beauty
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~Sharky my darling, you've left this space so desolate~</3
No I didn't!. Stop assuming things. ~Sharky :cry