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  Posted on March 16, 2010 03:35
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Just a simple poem all about the bad feelings within a person who feels everything. Please rate and CnC. Thank you for your time. And here it is my latest poem, Inner Madness.

Inner Madness

Hate, anger, despair and wrath
The feelings I bear combined
Killing the last shine within
That made me whole in destiny

Darkness, sadness, uncomfortable lackness
Indignation within my stony heart
Wolf in sheep's clothing you are
Stone-hearted I may be, but I wished for thee

Rose colored spectacles disappeared
To look in brightness has never reappeared
Bad, Evil, No Longer pure, my hatred
Has always been strong

No Hope, No Light, in this world no longer bright
Bleak feelings that mimic my heart
It conspires within me
To kill the last man sitting within
So Now go on and see
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  Posted on March 16, 2010 03:38
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Personally i love the poem and speaking of poems im late on making poems
ten out of ten
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  Posted on March 16, 2010 03:39
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Nice poem, i should start write again.
9.5/10.

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  Posted on March 16, 2010 03:40
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nc poem 9.8/10 :amused
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  Posted on March 16, 2010 03:41
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10/10
i love it, its like me on every monday:laugh
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  Posted on March 16, 2010 03:42
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Very nice poem :)
Keep it up
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  Posted on March 16, 2010 03:43
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10/10 .. :))
I love the poem ..
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  Posted on March 16, 2010 03:43
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Spectacular
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  Posted on March 16, 2010 04:11
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11/10 its awesome:embarressed :embarressed
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  Posted on March 16, 2010 22:23
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..I loved this poem!
deep and meaningful:amused
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