Ari's free verse.

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 11056 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#1 Wingless Guide Every day and any day it collides, eternity has no limit but what soul does? Crescendo of resounding angels pierce through the skies and revive the feelings of yesterday and make me feel the times of the past. The road which was walked on has decayed with age but the miraculous occurrence continues to live on. Echoing throughout weary minds that wander aimlessly looking for home. Resonating so vividly the horrors of before as shown in a smile that faded so long ago. I gave into your warmth which pierced through hearts. Fly away, into the immense darkness, one wing bird that continues to soar through the minds of those who believe. Intersect and connect the pieces that were once submerged in the greatest of depths. Guide through the night that stretches through eons overcome the tragic climax and sing once more so I may return back home. - My attempt at gathering ideas for a story. Constructively comment and/or criticize please.

Gol_D_Roger Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 146 Joined on: October 21, 2009

#2 Thas deep O_O ...... those your feelings? ????Pirate Revolution???? .Copyright ©2010 Pirate Revolution PR Chat Box ll One Piece Fan ll

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 11056 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#3 Gol_D_Roger wrote: Thas deep O_O ...... those your feelings? To an extent, yes.

experiment18 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1701 Joined on: July 15, 2008

#4 ...very deep and meaningful but loved the poem as always, great words and loved the meaning Hoppy<3

vocka Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 4742 Joined on: June 28, 2008

#5 i love it:amused Sig made by Shadow-Hokage

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 11056 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#6 Thank you Kim and Vocka.

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