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  Posted on March 14, 2010 02:47
itachi_uchiha6th
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Been awhile since my last poem, enjoy:embarressed

Sitting, thinking about what you've been through
the past,
was it necessary for them to act like that towards you?
treating you like a unwanted toy,
not for reason, but for joy
And it just disgusts me to know it was people I trust,
and not only do I like you cause you're you,
but I feel as if I must,
to show you that there is a better side,
the good life, in which it seems you've been deprived,
and for me to come out an express my feelings,
was it really a surprise?
Your perfect in every way imaginable
and there was no reason to let the feelings hide.
I could go on and on about how I feel,
but in the end everything wont come out
but as we go on,
they will forever sprout
And all and all, I want you too no how much you mean to me
and i wrote this not only for recognition,
but so you could see.

  Posted on March 14, 2010 02:51
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Wow.....
That's all i have to say.
I fail at poetry so.. this is rlly good.
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  Posted on March 14, 2010 02:53
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:cry ur so peotic :cry
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  Posted on March 14, 2010 02:58
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Poetry aint your thing.:confused
Haha kidding, 7/10.
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  Posted on March 14, 2010 13:51
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....:cry

Good poem.
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  Posted on March 16, 2010 20:57
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hahahaha...peotic....what a funny sounding word