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  Posted on March 12, 2010 21:56
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#16
ii don't like the forbiten jutsu because she loses alot of health also the skill should be powerfull 7.5/10 also ii forgot bite should be reworked
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  Posted on March 12, 2010 21:58
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Bite should have a cooldown or should cost a specific.
What's the point of the DR in The Forbidden Jutsu if she ignores all enemy damage?
She should take less damage from it also. Maybe 7 or 8.
The face and Bite pics could be better.

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  Posted on March 12, 2010 21:58
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9/10 change the forbidden jutsu a bit
  Posted on March 12, 2010 22:00
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9/10
The skills and face picture can be way improved. :amused
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  Posted on March 12, 2010 22:01
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#20
8.5/10 except the affliction shouldn't be each turn, But 3 turns, Until the character reaches 10 HP, Besides that, In the first move, it says "Hotaru (S) attacks his enemies" Note: "His" ;l..
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  Posted on March 12, 2010 22:02
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10/10:amused :amused
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  Posted on March 12, 2010 22:07
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#22
how long is the forbidden jutsu
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  Posted on March 12, 2010 22:08
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#23
good but during forbiden jutsu she is inincuble!this skill is op 9/10
  Posted on March 12, 2010 23:24
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#24
Pics are good, although, FP should be changed. Now for skills... Again that mess of classes (how can be The Forbidden Jutsu melee if Hotaru doesn't attack?). Also, she practically has 4 turns of life that way and another thing: you practically do some mistakes like this: why's the reason of having 75% that cannot be pierced if you say that she ignores enemy damaging skills?. Another thing, Bite should have a cooldown or cost one tai, when Raigng Waves shouldn't have a cooldown (Tsunade deals 30 damage with the same stun effect for one specific and one random with no C/D).

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  Posted on March 13, 2010 00:12
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pretty nice 8/10

i don't like da face pic
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  Posted on March 13, 2010 02:47
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sweet:amused :amused

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  Posted on March 13, 2010 11:56
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9.5/10 Good Job!:amused
  Posted on March 13, 2010 13:43
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9/10:smile :smile :smile
  Posted on March 13, 2010 14:09
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#29
Bite is a little OP

Forbiden Jutsu Is Op She gains 75% of damage reduction that can't be pierced and ignores damage.

But great work 7/10
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  Posted on June 26, 2010 21:08
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8/10:amazed :amazed :amazed
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