Poems by CBB


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  Posted on March 8, 2010 03:16
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Two Words Never To Say

All the promises I made,
I could not keep!
Everything that you went through,
I cannot apoligize for!
Remembering the old days,
are gone now!
I can't blame you for this,
but that is what I see!
I take this blame,
in which now I live with this shame!
For what I've done,
ruined this friendship!
Little by little it started to disappear,
until the last chance came to your fear!
You live life in fullest,
as I am stuck in dispare!
Day by day,
I live in sadness and lonelyness!
This can't be fixed,
it can't be whole again!
I've never got to say these two words,
which you presented to me without saying them!
Life will be hard without you,
even let you go!
But now I present these words never seemed to say to you,
Alana, here is my final Good-Bye!

My Promise

I fucked up;
this is my downfall!
You hate me;
I will always love you!
The end is here;
not for too long!
We are not friends;
strives me to mend it back!
My promises failed;
this one I'll keep!
This time;
will be my uprise!
You don't look at me;
when I present this promise!
You plug your ears;
as I walk in front!
You are amazed;
for I've lost weight!
You ask what promise;
promise to become a better man than yesterday!
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  Posted on March 8, 2010 03:17
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good poem. 7/10. i like your style.
  Posted on March 8, 2010 03:18
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itachiforlyf wrote:
good poem. 7/10. i like your style.

there is 2
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  Posted on March 8, 2010 03:19
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CBB wrote:
itachiforlyf wrote:
good poem. 7/10. i like your style.

there is 2
i've already seen the other one. :oh
  Posted on March 8, 2010 03:25
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Failz. :noworry
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  Posted on March 8, 2010 03:43
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wow i think its great 10/10:amused
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