Ari's free verse - Finale - Page 2

ItachiLover13 Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 165 Joined on: January 10, 2010

#16 Its Great:oh ||Auggie+Bobba=Aubton||"New" Warning System|| ||Tag By Advent||Ava By -__yondaime__-||Useful Guides/Tools for Custom Characters||

chidior_itachi Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3755 Joined on: June 26, 2007

#17 awsome poem ari 10/10 you have alot of talent :D My Lover and Sex Toy.||..||. I wanted to cyber so I clicked your link, but then I saw what it was and got all disappointed. ~ Neli ~ I wanted to cyber, so i had you come to my chat and we had wondrous fapping time together :) ~ shin

KaosKilla9231 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2230 Joined on: January 28, 2007

#18 Ari, My Dear, This Poem Is Astonishing As Always. There Isn't Any To Criticize, As There Is No Flaws In It. You Had Better Not Stop Writing, Because You Are One Of The Best This Forum Has To Offer =) I Really Like The First 5 Lines Mainly, And I'm Pretty Sure I've Got The Meaning Of The Whole Thing Down. Pure Masterpiece =) || Asylum || Avatar by Maddie || Tag by Jux || The Visionary ||

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 11056 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#19 KaosKilla9231 wrote: Ari, My Dear, This Poem Is Astonishing As Always. There Isn't Any To Criticize, As There Is No Flaws In It. You Had Better Not Stop Writing, Because You Are One Of The Best This Forum Has To Offer =) I Really Like The First 5 Lines Mainly, And I'm Pretty Sure I've Got The Meaning Of The Whole Thing Down. Pure Masterpiece =) Thank you James. @ Chidori - So I've been told. Thank you.

jun-ongbaksu Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 882 Joined on: May 26, 2008

#20 Great poem....it really seems like you're getting better at writing somehow lol although this poem looks feels like many other poems you have written... always the burden.. just saying ~sigless simplicity~

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 11056 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#21 jun-ongbaksu wrote: Great poem....it really seems like you're getting better at writing somehow lol although this poem looks feels like many other poems you have written... always the burden.. just saying Heh... Thanks Jun.

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