Ari's free verse - Finale

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 11056 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#1 Titled finale for a reason. ~ This feeling of wanting to lose it all just to earn some wings to fly high above the turmoil of this world. It continues to run throughout me, everlasting, never missing a beat. Petty things of a horrid past can’t be forgotten but only used as a weapon to show who’s superior and how closely tied blind loyalty is to the sins of the one naïve beings trust. Miraculous wonderings of why I cry, just like the window of my mind the feelings slipping through fragile cracks are heading towards a final explosion. Tell me who is one with pure heart ---untarnished by sorrow---let them be the one to judge me for they believe they’re God. Unneeded feelings surfacing upon the sky of my dreams why now do you intend to strike me with a wicked intent tearing away my paradise that lies amongst the dark? The sorrowful days of time before finally escaped me but of course like the burden you are once again you’re aiming to corrupt those whom I love and those whom are dear. Why won’t you just perish in this dying world that needs rejuvenation? I await my answer as I continue to yearn for wings to fly across and above what needs to be done and forgotten. ~ Constructively comment and/or criticize on which may be very well the last poem I post, for awhile at least.. Hope you enjoyed.

wickcityshinobi Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1132 Joined on: February 7, 2008

#2 failz:blink ...:::||21+||:::... ..........:::||Ninja squad||:::........... ||Anbu-Friend612- eviluchiha2690- n1nja-j3tai||

kismie124 Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 17058 Joined on: April 5, 2009

#3 wickcityshinobi wrote: failz:blink This is a person who really fails 10.0 Nice job Ari*

munta0 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1980 Joined on: August 30, 2007

#4 this is cool 5/10 Gimp Say WHAT--Official GFX Thread --King Of CNC, MAYBE Avatar by Alerane ^ N-B Noobs Don't Deserve CNC Showcase

itachiforlyf Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 776 Joined on: October 5, 2008

#5 wickcityshinobi wrote: failz:blink that wasn't very nice. why would you say that? if you can say something fails, be ready to justify why. anyway, it's great as always, and also just as depressing as always. my song another song Poem Another poem Yet another poem STORY

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 11056 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#6 itachiforlyf wrote: wickcityshinobi wrote: failz:blink that wasn't very nice. why would you say that? if you can say something fails, be ready to justify why. anyway, it's great as always, and also just as depressing as always. Odd how I clearly state to constructively comment and/or criticize yet people rate and/or do the complete opposite, how horrid... Anyways, thank you Jiji.

40_Glocc Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1180 Joined on: February 13, 2010

#7 Tell me who is one with pure heart ---untarnished by sorrow---let them be the one to judge me for they believe they’re God <-------------------I love that part I wanna make something like that for my gf, can you help me? Rest in peace, Al Davis. 1929-2011~ Why am I the only one that can see you.? You'll find out. I don't know when but, you will...

wickcityshinobi Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1132 Joined on: February 7, 2008

#8 kismie124 wrote: wickcityshinobi wrote: failz:blink This is a person who really fails 10.0 Nice job Ari* kismie124 failz ...:::||21+||:::... ..........:::||Ninja squad||:::........... ||Anbu-Friend612- eviluchiha2690- n1nja-j3tai||

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 11056 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#9 40_Glocc wrote: Tell me who is one with pure heart ---untarnished by sorrow---let them be the one to judge me for they believe they’re God <-------------------I love that part I wanna make something like that for my gf, can you help me? Sure hun. @ Kismie - Thank you.

itachiforlyf Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 776 Joined on: October 5, 2008

#10 wickcityshinobi wrote: kismie124 wrote: wickcityshinobi wrote: failz:blink This is a person who really fails 10.0 Nice job Ari* kismie124 failz there is no reason to be on this topic if you insist on spamming things that don't either help the poet, ari, or have anything to do with the thread. and 40_glocc, i'll be willing to help as well. my song another song Poem Another poem Yet another poem STORY

zTinGer Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2743 Joined on: July 13, 2009

#11 Lolz. ||Peruano||Gfxer|||| â–º zTinGer Memories La Traicion es Mala ... Pero La Venganza es mas Que Valida . . . We Are Avenger's !!

40_Glocc Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1180 Joined on: February 13, 2010

#12 Shino*Girl wrote: 40_Glocc wrote: Tell me who is one with pure heart ---untarnished by sorrow---let them be the one to judge me for they believe they’re God <-------------------I love that part I wanna make something like that for my gf, can you help me? Sure hun. @ Kismie - Thank you. Yay, thank you, Ari. @itachiforlyf:Thank you too. Rest in peace, Al Davis. 1929-2011~ Why am I the only one that can see you.? You'll find out. I don't know when but, you will...

Avion Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 945 Joined on: December 3, 2006

#13 I wish i could write 10/10 poems:huh

IceColdKiller Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 981 Joined on: March 15, 2009

#14 8/10 very good and dark at the same time Join MPRS! This is Icy's Main Alt. PM Hyuugaitachi007, also Retired...

itachiforlyf Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 776 Joined on: October 5, 2008

#15 Avion wrote: I wish i could write 10/10 poems:huh anyone who can feel and think can write. if you wan't help learning, i may be able to guide you. my song another song Poem Another poem Yet another poem STORY

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