Newest poem


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  Posted on March 6, 2010 21:40
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Whoo. Another poem already. Please read, and respond. Cnc, comment, rate. Whatever.



And so i lay down all alone,
And wish all night long that I had known,
Who you were inside,
So that maybe I,
Could find my way in,
And mend a friendship dear to me,
But instead you live a life of lies,
And never will you tell me why,
And the shadows dancing in my mind,
Whisper sayings in my ears,
And tell me who you were,
And why I am,
So now I know,
We were never meant to be,
I am meant to wander alone,
And never love,
I am alone,
And shall not again,
Fall in love,
So I never break or shatter,
As my heart's already scattered.
  Posted on March 6, 2010 21:41
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GJ

9/10

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  Posted on March 6, 2010 21:42
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10.0
nice
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  Posted on March 6, 2010 21:43
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damn i thought you said newest "porn":oh
on topic...
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  Posted on March 6, 2010 21:44
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epic fail just kidding jk u know :confused

~10/10
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  Posted on March 6, 2010 21:44
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Even though there is rhyming I still find it to be put together well, and it's actually very touching to me.
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  Posted on March 6, 2010 21:45
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wow itz nice

10/10
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  Posted on March 6, 2010 21:45
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Epic.
9/10
Unicorn Nipples.
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  Posted on March 6, 2010 21:46
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Whitney wrote:
Even though there is rhyming I still find it to be put together well, and it's actually very touching to me.
wow, thanks everybody.
  Posted on March 6, 2010 21:47
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Nice i like poems 10/10 :amused :amused
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You say "Crazy" like it's a bad thing!
  Posted on March 6, 2010 21:47
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its awesome good job
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  Posted on March 6, 2010 21:55
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I like it.
Thanks for giving me some ideas for my first offical real poem.
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  Posted on March 7, 2010 22:16
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Well thanks everybody. :amazed I didn't think it to be any good.