Light and Shadow


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  Posted on March 1, 2010 16:57
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The hot midsummer sky melts the asphalt
And as I crouch there
I fade to white
Light and shadows, in this world everything is an egoist with a meaning
Each individual piece spends its life keeping its balance
Your wish, my wish, even beyond the despair and hope
We’re still under the same sky now, feeling a slight pull
From these chains of fate
In this city that can’t stay clean
Like a dream, I scream but nobody can hear it
On this planet where the red moon rises
When I screamed at the knife of my spirit
I saw a soft light in somebody’s tearful eyes
Your heart, my heart, even beyond the despair and hope
We’re still under the same sky now, our bond growing little by little
But yet you seems so far away.
Light and shadow consume you,
Doing what I feel, what my heart wants to do…
We’re under the same sky now,
Light and shadows coming again and again


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  Posted on March 1, 2010 16:59
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good 8.5/10
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  Posted on March 1, 2010 17:02
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TheUnstopable wrote:
good 8.5/10
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  Posted on March 1, 2010 17:11
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good 10/10:cool :cool
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  Posted on March 1, 2010 19:22
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amazing poem kim:cry 10/10
  Posted on March 2, 2010 11:16
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I find this truely beautiful. I understand the feeling completely and have a idea of what it might be about, or WHO for that matter.
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  Posted on March 2, 2010 19:18
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thanks those who posted, srj, Whit
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  Posted on March 7, 2010 20:48
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  Posted on March 8, 2010 05:05
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wow nice I have'nt seen a poem
from you in ages :amused

The poem pulled me in and gently put
me down when i had finished :smile..
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