And So Fell The Sword Of Fate

UltimateGatsuga Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 901 Joined on: June 3, 2007

#1 ok.. second poem on N-A. i would like all to know that ive been writing poems for almost 1 year, but like i said before, i didnt take the whole year for this poem. ive written over 250 poems in these 365 days. This one took me about 7 minutes. And So Fell The Sword Of Fate My sheets were stained with blood. Tears from my eyes brought the flood. The end will soon begin. No more air, im giving in. Washed ashore by red. Blackened skies of consequence. Prolonged guarantees. Never really reaching me. Stabbed into the heart. I've been bleeding from the start. Fangs are gripping me. My life taking over me. Shattering the glass. Waiting for the storm to pass. I must be insane. To be reborn in the grave. Cold air into my chest. Asphyxiation, my final breath. I feel so sleep deprived in a world that doesn't let me close my eyes.

neji_uchia95 Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 4677 Joined on: August 7, 2008

#2 Wasnt this already posted? 6.5/10 You Better ? 09-Early10 MoNsTeR ;] Late10-11 scrub...

UltimateGatsuga Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 901 Joined on: June 3, 2007

#3 its a differetn one.

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