Ari's free verse


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  Posted on January 23, 2010 04:18
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  Posted on January 23, 2010 04:20
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nice.............8:amused :amused :amused
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  Posted on January 23, 2010 04:21
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Tell me your secret?!
I love it. Make more.
You're making me love everything you make. :sad
But but it's a good thing!
The use of words, everything. Very flow-ful.
You should be a poet. >.>
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  Posted on January 23, 2010 04:24
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Awwwww I love it my Tanky Ray :embarressed

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  Posted on January 23, 2010 04:26
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Nice poem Ari! <3

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  Posted on January 23, 2010 15:11
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cool 10:amused :amused
  Posted on January 23, 2010 19:27
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Ari, make a rhymed poem already! It's been more then 6 months since you promised to write one :blink
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  Posted on January 23, 2010 20:48
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Thanks everyone.

Dtim, I don't like forcing myself to rhyme.
  Posted on January 23, 2010 21:35
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Shino*Girl wrote:
I don't like forcing myself to rhyme.

It's not like you have to :confused

I never once forced myself to rhyme anything, yet it works quite well :huh
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  Posted on January 23, 2010 21:39
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wonderful...<3
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  Posted on January 26, 2010 01:10
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Dtim, I lack rhyming power.

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  Posted on February 21, 2011 22:58
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I <3 You, Ari. :embarressed This Is the Reason.
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  Posted on February 21, 2011 23:03
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You Are Stunning
Keep Awesome Work
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  Posted on February 23, 2011 12:07
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Wow, this poem has a lot of meaning, great job Arianna!
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  Posted on February 25, 2011 12:06
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Wow,amazing>
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