Rate 2 poems by CBB

CBB Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1503 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#1 I wrote them bith just see how you like em. Guilt + Pain You love much, but pain comes along! You think it's just a such, but the pain lasts long! Friendships, forever held, the spar begins to tell! Agony, remembrance, so very shelled, I'll remember the day when our friendship went to Hell! Time passes on, we forgive! Up til dawn, then she hates continuously as we live! On she goes on with her hate, she is going insane! Is this my fate, Racked with guilt and pain! Untitled I walked a lonely road, until someone special came along! A friend true at heart, as I am torn apart! It started good, we were making remembered memories! Up and down each day, until IT came around! This feeling in the heart, started to tear us apart! I was in love, but she gave me a shove! Months pass by, as we go into high! We don't talk, but she is taking strong and me soft! As I try to stop dwelling on the past, try to make things right for the future! Still trapt in a broken heart, again as I walk this lonely road! Have To Go Here ---> Super Awesome Character Collection \ Avatar thanks to: patarlaen Sig Thanks to: snowster

Trepadora2 Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 7719 Joined on: August 25, 2008

#2 45 % They are lovely. FREE SIGNATURES! Retired Bitch <3

Master_Cold Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 16190 Joined on: February 12, 2009

#3 You spelled trapped wrong in your second poem 7.5/10............ ~II~ Imperia ~II~ Avy by Sorina-Hokage ~II~ Cold Special Char ~II~

CBB Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1503 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#4 Master_Cold wrote: You spelled trapped wrong im your second poem 7.5/10............ Meant to be that way, I did it on purpose Have To Go Here ---> Super Awesome Character Collection \ Avatar thanks to: patarlaen Sig Thanks to: snowster

00SHARINGAN00 Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3100 Joined on: May 23, 2009

#5 7.8/10

kisamefan Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 517 Joined on: June 15, 2007

#6 8/10 i like the first one more

-Ayame- Rank: member Forum Rank: Legend Posts: 25216 Joined on: July 9, 2008

#7 Seemed like you kind of forced some of the lines to rhyme but they are pretty good. 7/10 SaiSai avys ♥ || Laka avys || SaiSai flower || Smexyness || I ♥ you guys || Hearts || Fruit Family ♥ || Ty Lux<3 || LakAyaWesome || Ty my UBR family <3 ||

SasoriX89078 Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 622 Joined on: November 29, 2008

#8 Nice poem it has decent flow 7/10 ~Nate

MOBJOBNARUTO Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3629 Joined on: August 8, 2008

#9 8/10 there good Avatar By: Cartoon11 II Gimp User II

Kakashi220796 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1149 Joined on: January 1, 2010

#10 nice man 8/10

ronghuiw Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1478 Joined on: September 15, 2008

#11 6.7/10 //+/Sig made by Klogitu\\+\ /+//Avatar byPhantom-San \+\\

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