Devil Knights


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  Posted on December 21, 2009 16:52
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Chapter 1

Slashes in the faint distance, the world is pitch black right now. A sudden noise appears from nothing and again and again the noises start to overlap until two swords collide. They may be wooden but these swords represent the power of two worlds colliding. Blue, just baby blue. Eyes as sweet as a babies smile, they are blue, dark blue. A uniform on both sides, they wear a black T-shirt with a white collar and Black jeans. One of the two has a white sash and a brown belt the other has no accesories. He appears, Baby blue hair and dark blue eyes but yet there is no fringe. Taoki, Taoki Midori.
Taoki knocks his opponent down quickly and with ease. He leaves the dojo. When he gets home his mother Mitsuki is cooking, she greets him

Mitsuki: Hey Taoki how did it go?
Taoki: Easy as usual.
Mitsuki: Riku called before so i let him in to your room.
Taoki: What? mum i'm 14 now you can't do this.
Mitsuki: he's your best friend Taoki, just go and see him.

Taoki rushes up the stairs and goes in to his room. Riku is sleeping on his bed...
Riku Oshiro is a 14 year old boy who likes to wear a headband (red in this incident) he has his brown hair tied back in to a ponytail but his hair is still quite long so bits of his hair stick out from his headband. He is going through a phase called "puberty" and he has had a sudden interest in girls but he is also very shy so he hates talking to someone that he "likes", but he is a very good friend and is always nice and will always do what he can to protect his friends. Unfortunatly he has a scar on the right side of his chin from an incident when we were younger but that is in the past.
I myself am also 14 except unlike Riku i am not so shy infact i'v been rejected over 25 times, although i shouldn't be proud of that, My name is Taoki Midori and my Mother is Mitsuki Midori, unfortunatly for me and my mother, my father died 5 months before i was born, but according to my mother he was a good man. My hair is Baby blue and My eyes are dark blue, I have no scars on my body as i am an exceptional fighter in the dojo, infact i even keep a folded wooden sword with me just incase. But then again, so do most of my friends.
Taoki sees Riku lying on his bed and decides to take advantage so he goes in to his cupboard and pulls out a can and this can contained cream, whipped cream. he sprayed it on Riku hand and then tickled his nose but before he knew it Riku had shoved his hand on Taokis shirt . Taoki reacted violently.

Taoki: aaarggh. What the hell Riku, you were still awake.
Riku: nahh it was my reflexes.
Taoki: well now i have to change with you here don't I
Riku: afraid that i'm gay
Taoki: well..

Riku gives Taoki the eyes. Taoki changes in to blue jeans and a black buttoned shirt. Taoki and Riku each grab a controller from the game system and begin to play a game and while they play they talk about school

Riku: so how are you getting on at math?
Taoki: do i honestly need to anwser, it's the same as usual. I suck
Riku: yeah i know

They continue to play until Mitsuki calls them down for tea. They trudge down the stairs and jump on the chairs then they begin to chat even more.

Taoki: so Riku do you by chance like Ai?
Riku: maybe just a bit, but i wouldn't ask her out ever
Taoki: do you want me to ask her out for you
Riku: no chance!
Taoki: don't worry i was just kidding

They both laugh and when they are finished Riku decides to go home.

Riku: thanks for having me over Mrs. Midori.
Mitsuki: it's no problem dear
Taoki: cya tommorow
Riku: cya

Riku heads off and starts listening to his Ipod but it is nightime and mysterious things happen at nightime, Yellowish white eyes appear behind a building. A strange noise is made
To be continued



  Posted on December 21, 2009 16:54
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reserver till i finish reading
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  Posted on December 21, 2009 17:01
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why doesn't anyone ever reply
  Posted on December 21, 2009 17:01
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Wow :amazed
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  Posted on December 21, 2009 17:01
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Wow :amazed
did you like it
  Posted on December 21, 2009 17:07
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too lazy to read hahahaha:laugh :laugh :laugh :laugh
  Posted on March 15, 2010 09:07
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I dont now..............:laugh :laugh :laugh :nuts
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  Posted on March 16, 2010 01:21
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i like it its a good cliff hanging chapter and a semi-quick read. A+++++
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  Posted on March 18, 2010 22:04
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pownage1234 wrote:
i like it its a good cliff hanging chapter and a semi-quick read. A+++++

Thanks, I need alot of editing to be done and most of my chapters end with cliff hangers because i don't know how else to end them yet