:+: Story: Midnight's Rain- Prologue Pt 2 :+:


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  Posted on December 21, 2009 15:08
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NOTE: The first Prologue is in my siggy. Do not say it is too long and that you won't read it. That will be considered spam. There's no need to rate, just CnC. If you need translations, just ask and I'll be glad to tell you :amused

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*Unknown Guy POV*

“Where am I? Is this a dream?” I demanded to the shadows but no one answers, it remains silent. I start turning in circles looking for something, anything that could help me find out where I am but in every direction I look, there’s only darkness.

I can’t see my body and when I feel myself lifting my hand, I can’t see it, only darkness.

It’s cold. So cold and dark. I’m wary. I feel like it’s becoming darker but my body feels warmer somehow though nothing changes. It’s warm. I’m tired, I’m so tired …

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BEEP
BEEP
BEEP
SMASH!!!!

“Ugh! What time is it?” I groggily said as I looked at my broken clock. “Shit, mum’s going to kill me” I hastily cleaned up the mess before my mother could come and investigate. I walked into the bathroom that was connected to my room to get cleaned up. My bathroom is one of a kind. It has black marble floors and walls as well as a large swimming pool sized bath right in the middle of the room. Now this bath was designed for a specific reason(I will say what it is later).

After I finished my shower I started to get ready for school. I wear my black shorts that reach just below my knees and a sleeveless open-buttoned shirt with a grey muscle shirt underneath. There was a tie included in the uniform but for some reason I don’t have to wear it. Additional to the uniform I add a black-silver chain that hangs from my left-back pocket to my left-front pocket, a black-silver chain that has a kunai pendant hanging from it is on my neck as well as a black silver ring with a tiny emerald diamond in the middle. All of these pieces of jewellery are heirlooms and for some reason my mother forces me to wear them daily, she won’t tell me what for but I have a feeling I’ll find out soon.

“SON, HURRY UP OR YOU’LL BE LATE FOR SCHOOL” My mother screeched from the other side of the house. I hurried down the stairs. Now I am by no means scared of my mother but she can get REALLY freaky when she is mad.

We all ran out the door before she could come inside from the backyard and by we I mean my friends and I.

We just recently moved here but we were given a tour yesterday and knew our way since coincidently we all have photographic memories except Kiyoshi although her memory is efficient enough since she still got accepted into this school.

Let me introduce my friends.
The first is Namida No Kiyoshi. She is the perverted and sarcastic best friend of mine. I’ve known Kiyoshi since we were 5 when I saved her from choking on water, the very element she can control. Kiyoshi is the heir to the Namida Clan who are a well known Angel clan that can control anything with liquid within them, which also means human organisms. This technique was so dangerous that a seal was voluntarily put on them enabling them to control humans. Once they turned 21 and finished their schooling at Shadow Academy only, they were given a choice. Remove the seal or keep the seal. Most within the clan accept that the seal is necessary but there are few that choose to remove it.

Kiyoshi is very recognisable because of her features. She has snow white hair that appears to have an aqua blue tint to it when within the sun, her eyes are a dark shade of blue while her most known feature is her teeth which tend to be razor sharp when her wings are activated, all traits inherited from her kin. She is currently wearing a black unbuttoned shirt that has sleeves along with a dark blue tank-top that matches her eyes, a pair of black loose pants and around her waist he wears a light blue belt. Strapped to her back is a massive katana that is around the size of half her body, it was a present given to her by her Uncle Kenta.

The second is Nagoyaka Riku. Riku is very silent , calm and collected. Nothing really fazes him except the rare occasions when Souta gets him to blush. Although he is Heir to the Nagoyaka Clan, Riku’s sexual preferences make him unable to mate properly unless he finds a male that will willingly carry a child and is of human decent. This is only able to happen if the male he loves is willing. Only the kin of the Nagoyaka Clan are able to impregnate both sexes as a mutated pheromone is running through their blood.

Riku always appears as mysterious by the way he dresses. His school uniform consists of a long black trench coat that goes all the way to his knees, an alizarin red muscle shirt that suits his shaggy red hair, black skinny jeans with a silver chain hanging from his right pocket and a silver promise ring on his left forefinger. He has mesmerizing silver eyes with a silver piercing on his right eyebrow.

The third is Souta. He has a very bubbly personality, the complete opposite of his partner Riku. Souta was often picked on when he was a child because he was an orphan. Riku often had to protect him from bullies until he could defend himself. Souta wasn’t original gay, but after he met and formed a bond with Riku, his attraction towards men grew until finally he formed a sexual relationship with Riku at the age of 15, one year before I met him. Not much is known about his family except his mother died giving birth to him, a fact he blames on himself, and his father disappeared after naming him but never left a surname.

Souta is a very feminine looking male and is often mistaken for a female. He has short dark magenta hair with light purple highlights and two strips of hair that go down past his shoulders. He’s eyes are an amazing shade of icy blue that even make me envious sometimes. He keeps his style pretty plain and tends to wear the school uniform exactly how the dress code states. Long black comfortable pants and a short-sleeved black button-upped shirt, the only thing out of place is the necklace he wears around his neck and the silver ring on his left forefinger.

Lastly, I’ll introduce Yin. She’s very, well to put things in simpler terms weird. We found her in the forest where we used to live one day and she just seemed to follow me everywhere. Gradually we got used to it and got to know her more. She hardly ever spoke and at first we thought she was mute but as time went on, we found out she was just extremely shy. She tends to blush a bright pink whenever affection is shown to her and because of these quality’s she is protected by us.

Now Yin is by no means weak. When she is provoked or threatened a whole new side of her is shown. Her luscious, wavy midnight blue hair will lengthen, while her unique grey eyes will change depending on her emotions. Her gorgeous pale skin will darken to a light peach colour and her instincts will become finer, more sharpened. We have yet to find out whether these traits are of Angel Bloodline but so far we don’t think it is.

Yin’s sense of style suits her personality. On one hand she wears black long pants and a long-sleeved black button-up shirt but on the other she wears a crimson red belly shirt with black netting underneath. From her right front pocket hangs a black-silver chain and on her neck is a black-silver shuriken pendant. On her wrist adorns a mesmerizing bracelet that curves all around her forearm, which she says feels comfortable. All these pieces of jewellery were with her when we found her.

I was shot out of my thoughts when I heard someone calling me.

“Sempai, are you alright?” Yin softly asked.

“Yea, I’m good. See” I said trying to put on my best smile for her. ‘She was always too sweet for her own good’ he thought as they walked the rest of the way to school.

“So, what are we gonna do when we get there?” Souta exclaimed.

“What do you mean, Koi?” Riku quietly whispered.

“I mean, what are we gonna do?” He asked again while rolling his eyes. “Do we have to seem weak again like last time? Because that really sucks if we do” Souta made a pouting expression that made everyone laugh.

“Not this time swee….”

“WAIT” Yin screamed out, effectively cutting off Riku.

“What is it Yin? What’s wrong?”

“Sempai, don’t you feel it? Her?” Yin whimpered frantically looking around.

“Her?” I questioned.

“The girl from my dreams. I can feel her, she’s real.”

“Yin, she’s not real. I can’t feel anything unusu……wait, I can’t feel her” I whispered in disbelief.

“Who taishou?” Said Kiyoshi, who finally decided to speak.

I slowly, almost hesitantly, lifted my hand to point at a girl in the distance. They all turned and stared.

“Her.”

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  Posted on December 21, 2009 15:09
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very good intro's. liked it very much. you should go over it and check for grammar errors and mistakes. found some. btw liked how you included some things from avatar. like the name kiyoshi, and the liquid control (blood bending)
over all good story. look forward to the next part.:rolleyes
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  Posted on December 21, 2009 15:13
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Riku is awesome, though he doesnt seem like much of an combatilist, also if he can impregnate other men, then where do they have the babies from? :confused



real good story: 9/10


cant wait to read more
  Posted on December 21, 2009 15:14
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Nami-unnie.. You didn't send me a pm! :'(
Haha, just joking. Good thing I was in time. ^^

Wow. Mesmerizing. A great addition for a second prologue, Nami! I wonder who that creepy girl was in the dream. Makes me very curious. Please continue writing and good luck! Hwaiting! ^^

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  Posted on December 21, 2009 15:15
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Wow!!!
really cool Nami.chan!! :amazed
I love it!!!<3<3<3<3
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  Posted on December 21, 2009 15:18
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-Yuri- wrote:
Nami-unnie.. You didn't send me a pm! :'(
Haha, just joking. Good thing I was in time. ^^

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I was going to hun but yea you turned up here anyway lol
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  Posted on December 21, 2009 15:18
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reserved till i finish reading
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  Posted on December 21, 2009 15:23
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Lethalninja657 wrote:
very good intro's. liked it very much. you should go over it and check for grammar errors and mistakes. found some. btw liked how you included some things from avatar. like the name kiyoshi, and the liquid control (blood bending)
over all good story. look forward to the next part.:rolleyes
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  Posted on December 21, 2009 15:26
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Lethalninja657 wrote:
very good intro's. liked it very much. you should go over it and check for grammar errors and mistakes. found some. btw liked how you included some things from avatar. like the name kiyoshi, and the liquid control (blood bending)
over all good story. look forward to the next part.:rolleyes
That really wasn't my intention. But I'm glad you liked it :amused

@r_starks: The thing with the whole babies is that when they have sex and Riku ejaculates, it will also release a form of acid that will create a reaction within Souta's body that will make his organs shift in order for him to be able to carry and hold a child.
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  Posted on December 21, 2009 15:28
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Awesome.
I know some of them.:laugh :laugh :laugh


Awesome.
Just awesome.
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  Posted on December 21, 2009 15:30
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Namida_No_Sakura wrote:
That really wasn't my intention. But I'm glad you liked it :amused

@r_starks: The thing with the whole babies is that when they have sex and Riku ejaculates, it will also release a form of acid that will create a reaction within Souta's body that will make his organs shift in order for him to be able to carry and hold a child.

Naneun... Your story is very very interesting Nami~! Very detailed too, eh? ;P ^^
Good job again! ^^
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  Posted on December 21, 2009 15:31
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Yin is cute!!!! :tounge
I can tell! ;3
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  Posted on December 21, 2009 15:34
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Yin is cute!!!! :tounge
I can tell! ;3
Yes yes,you are.:tounge :tounge
  Posted on December 21, 2009 15:38
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Hinata_and_me wrote:
Yin is cute!!!! :tounge
I can tell! ;3
Yes yes,you are.:tounge :tounge
lol, thanks Deno, but I was talking about the character :embarressed :teeth
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  Posted on December 21, 2009 15:47
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Thanks everyone :amused
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