niteshadow's love *rate


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  Posted on December 2, 2009 07:56
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Meoshi, Meoshi kun.
Your deepened gaze pierces through my soul.
This feeling of lust is hard to describe.
The light blue of your glimmering eyes sustains my very existence.
And is enough to fill me with hope everyday.
For this love I hold dear is killing me from within.
Please, take this blade.
TAKE THIS BLADE. And run through me.
May the love seep ever so sweetly out from my aching heart.
The red and a reflection of your face will be a soothing farewell.
But before I fade.
I have only one wish.
Hold me. Hold me ever so tightly.
Gaze into my fading eyes and gently whisper those words.
The words I've been searching for all this time.
The absent sentence I nearly and always died to hear.
Let me hear those glistening tender lips of yours.
"I love you".
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The poem for my love Meoshi. She is my one.

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And the song that inspired it: it took my breath away :cry


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  Posted on December 2, 2009 08:01
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8/10 :oh
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  Posted on December 2, 2009 08:08
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Hmm .... 9/10 .... :embarressed
Not bad ..... :embarressed
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  Posted on December 2, 2009 08:08
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  Posted on December 2, 2009 08:09
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hi every buddy :teeth :teeth :teeth :teeth
:embarressed :embarressed :embarressed :laugh
No SiGGss!!!!!!!!:
  Posted on December 2, 2009 08:10
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8/10

! ! ! ! !

not that good:teeth :teeth
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  Posted on December 2, 2009 08:10
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eliminate004 wrote:
hi every buddy :teeth :teeth :teeth :teeth
So what do you think? Is it ok??? :oh
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The poem for my love Meoshi. She is my one.

click here

And the song that inspired it: it took my breath away :cry


My Rivals:
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  Posted on December 2, 2009 08:24
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Meh?
6.
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  Posted on December 2, 2009 08:24
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nice but 6/10 buddy
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  Posted on December 2, 2009 08:28
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#10
wow. 100% that poem should b published.

EDIT: naruto-boards isn't really the place u want to go to get poems rated, because that poem is beautiful and these nerds can't respect it.
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  Posted on December 2, 2009 08:41
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really cool 9/10
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  Posted on December 2, 2009 08:44
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really good i can give 8/10
:embarressed :embarressed :embarressed :laugh
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  Posted on December 2, 2009 08:59
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niteshadow wrote:
eliminate004 wrote:
hi every buddy :teeth :teeth :teeth :teeth
So what do you think? Is it ok??? :oh


its good i can give10/10 its my another account of eliminate004
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  Posted on December 2, 2009 09:36
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that would be just 6 and all.....................:amused
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  Posted on December 3, 2009 01:09
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Thank you everyone for reading. :teeth
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The poem for my love Meoshi. She is my one.

click here

And the song that inspired it: it took my breath away :cry


My Rivals:
AlWilson and redcallblue