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  Posted on November 27, 2009 03:49
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Rate, comment, and explanations for your rates is all that I ask for.
This time at least try to give some suggestions on how to make the character better please.


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  Posted on November 27, 2009 03:51
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i like the last one WAY better 4/10:sick
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 03:52
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SasukeChidori93 wrote:
i like the last one WAY better 4/10:sick
Thats not helping kid.:oh
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 03:53
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Yours is quite different and at the same time very appealing. :oh
I think the cooldown for boiling oil is to high, lower it by 1.
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 03:54
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Trepadora-Two wrote:
Yours is quite different and at the same time very appealing. :oh
I think the cooldown for boiling oil is to high, lower it by 1.
88 %
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Ok thanks.
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BooYouSuck wrote:
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
DoubleSharingan wrote:
| Crank that Soulja Boy | :oh |
I Seriously lol'd
Poor Kid............XD
  Posted on November 27, 2009 03:57
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8/10
very good
but just make the pics a bit lighter:blink
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 04:04
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Trepadora-Two wrote:
Yours is quite different and at the same time very appealing. :oh
I think the cooldown for boiling oil is to high, lower it by 1.
88 %
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no i disagree, i think its fine the way it is. You have to wait to use the kebari skill first anyways and by the time you do, the 3 cooldown will probably be over
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 04:13
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Its a little confusing but I like it.

Skills: 8/10
Description: 7/10
Quality: 9/10

Overall 8/10 Nice Job!
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 04:16
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good one not bad.6/10[url= ][/url] [url= ][/url]
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 10:07
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Pictures 6/10
Quality 9/10
Skills 8/10

Overall 7.2/10

(Change face pic, its crappy. He has too many skills and he uses every chakra which conflict with any team he goes on. Other than that pretty good.) :noworry
  Posted on November 27, 2009 10:10
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lightningblade5 wrote:
Pictures 6/10
Quality 9/10
Skills 8/10

Overall 7.2/10

(Change face pic, its crappy. He has too many skills and he uses every chakra which conflict with any team he goes on. Other than that pretty good.) :noworry
I'm not changing the face pic.
When has having 6 skills ever too many? N-A's Jiraiya uses all chakras, but I don't see you complaining about it.:oh

Thanks for the rate, and I value your input.
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BooYouSuck wrote:
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
DoubleSharingan wrote:
| Crank that Soulja Boy | :oh |
I Seriously lol'd
Poor Kid............XD
  Posted on November 27, 2009 10:15
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Lightning-Blade7 wrote:
lightningblade5 wrote:
Pictures 6/10
Quality 9/10
Skills 8/10

Overall 7.2/10

(Change face pic, its crappy. He has too many skills and he uses every chakra which conflict with any team he goes on. Other than that pretty good.) :noworry
I'm not changing the face pic.
When has having 6 skills ever too many? N-A's Jiraiya uses all chakras, but I don't see you complaining about it.:oh

Thanks for the rate, and I value your input.
i do complain about it and i dont use jiraiya because of it. just sayin :amused
Edit- our names r kinda the same :oh
  Posted on November 27, 2009 10:54
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8/10 i like[img][/img] [img][/img] [img][/img]
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 10:56
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lightningblade5 wrote:
Edit- our names r kinda the same :oh
I noticed smirk.gif
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BooYouSuck wrote:
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
DoubleSharingan wrote:
| Crank that Soulja Boy | :oh |
I Seriously lol'd
Poor Kid............XD
  Posted on November 27, 2009 10:57
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8/10 i like it:amused