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  Posted on November 27, 2009 03:49
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#1
Rate, comment, and explanations for your rates is all that I ask for.
This time at least try to give some suggestions on how to make the character better please.


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  Posted on November 27, 2009 03:51
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i like the last one WAY better 4/10

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  Posted on November 27, 2009 03:52
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Quote by SasukeChidori93
i like the last one WAY better 4/10

Thats not helping kid.
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 03:53
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Yours is quite different and at the same time very appealing.
I think the cooldown for boiling oil is to high, lower it by 1.
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 03:54
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Quote by Trepadora-Two
Yours is quite different and at the same time very appealing.
I think the cooldown for boiling oil is to high, lower it by 1.
88 %


Ok thanks.
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 03:57
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8/10
very good
but just make the pics a bit lighter
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 04:04
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Quote by Trepadora-Two
Yours is quite different and at the same time very appealing.
I think the cooldown for boiling oil is to high, lower it by 1.
88 %


no i disagree, i think its fine the way it is. You have to wait to use the kebari skill first anyways and by the time you do, the 3 cooldown will probably be over
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 04:13
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#8
Its a little confusing but I like it.

Skills: 8/10
Description: 7/10
Quality: 9/10

Overall 8/10 Nice Job!

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D and C Rank Missions - 10/10
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 04:16
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#9
good one not bad.6/10
  Posted on November 27, 2009 10:07
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Pictures 6/10
Quality 9/10
Skills 8/10

Overall 7.2/10

(Change face pic, its crappy. He has too many skills and he uses every chakra which conflict with any team he goes on. Other than that pretty good.)
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 10:10
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Quote by lightningblade5
Pictures 6/10
Quality 9/10
Skills 8/10

Overall 7.2/10

(Change face pic, its crappy. He has too many skills and he uses every chakra which conflict with any team he goes on. Other than that pretty good.)

I'm not changing the face pic.
When has having 6 skills ever too many? N-A's Jiraiya uses all chakras, but I don't see you complaining about it.

Thanks for the rate, and I value your input.
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 10:15
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Quote by Lightning-Blade7
Quote by lightningblade5
Pictures 6/10
Quality 9/10
Skills 8/10

Overall 7.2/10

(Change face pic, its crappy. He has too many skills and he uses every chakra which conflict with any team he goes on. Other than that pretty good.)

I'm not changing the face pic.
When has having 6 skills ever too many? N-A's Jiraiya uses all chakras, but I don't see you complaining about it.

Thanks for the rate, and I value your input.
i do complain about it and i dont use jiraiya because of it. just sayin
Edit- our names r kinda the same
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 10:54
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#13
8/10 i like
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 10:56
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Quote by lightningblade5

Edit- our names r kinda the same

I noticed
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  Posted on November 27, 2009 10:57
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8/10 i like it

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