I should change (Badly writen poem)

Rawr-Its-Melia Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 652 Joined on: August 11, 2009

#1 This is a stupid peom that is badly writen and has no point and you will all hate and rate it a 0 because it is retarded and gey. I stand alone. With a heart of stone. Wondering why I should care. My friends are gone. They’ve all said so long. They are no longer there. My body is a shell. In this lifeless hell. It holds a soul. Dark like the bottom of a well. It’s hard to care when you don’t. Hard to live when your heart won’t. Beat just to save your life. Because it’s filled with this awful strife. The tears fall. My words stall. And I try not to break down. They didn’t ask. Too much of a task. They’d rather see me frown. So I pick up the knife. And make a small slice. It should suffice. At least for tonight. I know I should stop this behaviour. Because I’m looking at a gun like it’s my saviour. I know I should break away. From the ‘friends’ who never stay. I know I should stop, but I won't I know I should change. But I don’t. Because I’m broken and bleeding. It’s all that I’ve got. The knife, the drugs. No matter how hard I fought. I know I should stop, but I don't. I know I should change. I also know, I won’t. Unicorn Nipples.

Coolidger Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2391 Joined on: August 17, 2006

#2 It's not stupid Kayla. It's amazing. 9/10<3 (I don't give that often) I think you should write more =) ~Retired This man will be missed! <3 ~ Nimetz Alex is mine! Get back, woman!~Dassyyyy I love you ~ Dimmy

firewave52 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1053 Joined on: November 29, 2007

#3 umm only read have but its kinda touched me 7/10..... it rythms Click ^Why Mods.. Why?

matiasmab21 Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 7220 Joined on: November 22, 2008

#4 everybody should change something of themselves 6/10 Do not use inverse psicology like "rate 1 in order people rate 10", it's obvious xD +21.Team.with.Starter.Chars

uchihaprodigy255 Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 5683 Joined on: July 7, 2008

#5 Don't be so hard on yourself. It's actually pretty good, albeit depressing. 7/10

StealthAssasin Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3369 Joined on: April 5, 2009

#6 8 Playercard by:krumper07 http://www.naruto-boards.com/628590/awesome-symbols/1/#post13341466

Rawr-Its-Melia Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 652 Joined on: August 11, 2009

#7 matiasmab21 wrote: everybody should change something of themselves 6/10 Do not use inverse psicology like "rate 1 in order people rate 10", it's obvious xD I wasn't. Unicorn Nipples.

matiasmab21 Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 7220 Joined on: November 22, 2008

#8 Rawr-Its-Melia wrote: matiasmab21 wrote: everybody should change something of themselves 6/10 Do not use inverse psicology like "rate 1 in order people rate 10", it's obvious xD I wasn't. K, im sorry for my misunderstanding but it's a good poem! keep on working like that +21.Team.with.Starter.Chars

try360 Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 162 Joined on: February 6, 2008

#9 9 Nice:amused

Rawr-Its-Melia Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 652 Joined on: August 11, 2009

#10 matiasmab21 wrote: Rawr-Its-Melia wrote: matiasmab21 wrote: everybody should change something of themselves 6/10 Do not use inverse psicology like "rate 1 in order people rate 10", it's obvious xD I wasn't. K, im sorry for my misunderstanding but it's a good poem! keep on working like that It's fine. You know, this is the first poem I've actually shown people. Unicorn Nipples.

ts_faraz Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 8497 Joined on: June 1, 2009

#11 Coolidger wrote: It's not stupid Kayla. It's amazing. 9/10<3 (I don't give that often) I think you should write more =) <3 Eva . NEW !!! showcase omg crownzey ;3

jun-ongbaksu Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 882 Joined on: May 26, 2008

#12 wow If you wana permanent change eat with plastic knives and forks na im jokin no worries..... love the poem i really felt something while reading it,and yeah its great....*speechless*........ unrate-able:teeth ~sigless simplicity~

Dokina_Abetara Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1694 Joined on: August 1, 2008

#13 Nicely written Aya. -Sig by Kaos--Avy by thwayset21- KidoHina...4ever<33 Forever one Hunter, forever going alone Me wrote: When did the life of one become greater than the totality of many?

dragonx3000 Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 715 Joined on: September 26, 2008

#14 i don't see anything wrong with it whoever said it stupid they're gay plz click on him

Rawr-Its-Melia Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 652 Joined on: August 11, 2009

#15 jun-ongbaksu wrote: wow If you wana permanent change eat with plastic knives and forks na im jokin no worries..... love the poem i really felt something while reading it,and yeah its great....*speechless*........ unrate-able:teeth Oh wow. Thanks. ._. Unicorn Nipples.

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