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Posted on November 25, 2009 23:48

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CnC, Ratings...Theories...I wanna see if you all notice anything

Never she wanes
Always in heart
Timothy she claims
As the start
Start of happiness
Health without pain
Always together
Sharing a name
Timothy's her faithful
Under skies of love
Remember the lonesome
Man pulls her home
Wrapped in arms softly
Ever so gentle in care
Impossibly loyal and charming
Eternally wooing,
Remember the lonely
Man steals a kiss
Away from the lonely
Natasha's his bliss,
Nectar, in a kiss

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Posted on November 25, 2009 23:49

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good poem
i like the fact that it rhymes:huh
i notice that there is a person named timothy:amused

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Posted on November 25, 2009 23:49

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i dont like it improve what does man pulls her home mean it sounds like rape it doesnt fit together it's like 2 poems inone

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Posted on November 25, 2009 23:50

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rhymy good 8:oh :oh

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Posted on November 25, 2009 23:50

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Very Good poem
10/10 e.e

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Posted on November 25, 2009 23:50

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TheAcountStealer wrote:

i dont like it improve

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Master_Cold wrote:

good poem
i like the fact that it rhymes:huh
i notice that there is a person named timothy

seeing as that's my name..yes there is

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Posted on November 25, 2009 23:51

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Edit- nevermind.

i like it.

Posted on November 25, 2009 23:51

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i like 10/10 GJ Lazy it was interesting

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Posted on November 25, 2009 23:53

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Is the thing I'm suppose to notice is Natasha?
Natasha Sturmweiermann?

Never she wanes
Always in heart
Timothy she claims
As the start
Start of happiness
Health without pain
Always together
Sharing a name
Timothy's her faithful
Under skies of love
Remember the lonesome
Man pulls her home
Wrapped in arms softly
Ever so gentle in care
Impossibly loyal and charming
Eternally wooing,
Remember the lonely
Man steals a kiss
AAway from the lonely
Natasha's his bliss,
Nectar, in a kiss

Posted on November 25, 2009 23:53

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#10

00SHARINGAN00 wrote:

Is the thing I'm suppose to notice is Natasha?

¦¦ ℓαzу© ¦¦ Would you accompany me, to the edge of the sea... ¦¦

¦¦Teams ¦ Etre le coup de foudre ¦ Foundations ¦¦

Posted on November 25, 2009 23:55

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