my last poem


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  Posted on November 25, 2009 03:10
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seeing as this wanst a dream of mine after this im quitting poetry......dont cry i still have one more my best poem yet maybe..its called death by me here goes nothin

DEATH BY MANMANS
Death the most unexpected thing in life
Death makes it impossible to fight
Trying to run from death is like running with a kite
Your always in its sight
Death is as black as night
So its impossible to sight
When death finds you it will make you see the light
Death the most unexepected thing in life

the end ppl
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  Posted on November 25, 2009 03:14
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just stop 1/10 :oh
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  Posted on November 25, 2009 03:14
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nice...................................6
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  Posted on November 25, 2009 03:15
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  Posted on November 25, 2009 03:15
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ThePuppet_Master wrote:
just stop 1/10 :oh
did u really have to add the beginning
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  Posted on November 25, 2009 03:16
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manmans wrote:
ThePuppet_Master wrote:
just stop 1/10 :oh
did u really have to add the beginning
no sorry,, i just never understand poetry, its not that its bad,, im just ignorant
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  Posted on November 25, 2009 03:17
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ThePuppet_Master wrote:
manmans wrote:
ThePuppet_Master wrote:
just stop 1/10 :oh
did u really have to add the beginning
yes
so rude
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  Posted on November 25, 2009 03:17
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manmans wrote:
ThePuppet_Master wrote:
manmans wrote:
ThePuppet_Master wrote:
just stop 1/10 :oh
did u really have to add the beginning
yes
so rude
i edited to the post.
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  Posted on November 25, 2009 03:19
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ThePuppet_Master wrote:
manmans wrote:
ThePuppet_Master wrote:
manmans wrote:
ThePuppet_Master wrote:
just stop 1/10 :oh
did u really have to add the beginning
yes
so rude
i edited to the post.
i see that sorry
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  Posted on November 25, 2009 03:19
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sorry but i hated it and dont worry. i wont cry that youre quitting.
  Posted on November 25, 2009 03:20
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10/10 i love that poem because its the truth great last poem
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  Posted on November 25, 2009 03:26
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Ugh really bad.
As a poet myself I think you should quit.
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  Posted on November 25, 2009 03:29
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OMFG
DID YOU PPL READ WHAT I POSTED AT THE BEGINNING
THIS IS MY LAST POEM SO STOP TELLING ME TO QUIT CAUSE I AM ANYWAY
WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU PPL:mad :mad
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  Posted on November 25, 2009 03:30
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lol you got anger issues dude.

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  Posted on November 25, 2009 03:50
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I like the poem 9/10
great job
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