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  Posted on November 24, 2009 15:12
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9/10 :amused
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sry for double post :sad
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  Posted on November 24, 2009 15:18
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i smell OP.. 5/10

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  Posted on November 24, 2009 15:21
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5/10 :cool
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  Posted on November 24, 2009 15:32
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wow I like it a lot 8/10 exellent pics :amazed
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  Posted on November 24, 2009 15:42
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Way too OP, and I'd like it if you hadn't used the same pics as me.. Or to be honest the same character, but there's nothing I can do:suspicious .
- Uchiha leaders.. LOLWUTTHEFUCK? Makes no sense...
- Grammar isn't great
- Pictures are out of place
- Text and chakra is out of place...
- You give him skills that are already too OP, and then make THEM skills prove other OP skills to make them EVEN MORE OP...
- Use your own pictures and skills...
- " He is able to murder his opponents in a flash " Don't go making things up, no proof of it no matter what type of Sharingan he has, description should be based on true and proved facts said in anime/manga.
- The skill " Sparring " shows him missing a hit...
- " Give my your eyes " Isn't such a creative name for a skill.
You shouldn't add two types of sharingans, stick to one.


It's a good start, you could change a lot of things to make it better, you don't want to make a character OP no matter how strong or weak they are in anime, even if it was Konohamaru at the age of 2, or Madara at his strongest age, you'd want to make it balanced.

Anyway 3/10, It's way too OP.
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  Posted on November 24, 2009 16:00
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well i trired to be good. thank u a lot. i will make sasuke when kirin move comes out and also when susanoo comes out
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  Posted on November 24, 2009 16:13
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shoaib5 wrote:
well i trired to be good. thank u a lot. i will make sasuke when kirin move comes out and also when susanoo comes out

Just remember not to make them OP, skill damage isn't based on it's pwness in anime.
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  Posted on November 24, 2009 16:15
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ow! cool 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![img][/img] [img][/img]
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  Posted on November 24, 2009 16:18
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yes i know that shade man. anyways if u want want hq pics like i have click here make sure u have lime wire and vlc media player downloaded. when u play the videos u cant prnt scr them. instead u will need to go to tools> preferences>video. then click browse go 2 my documents> sample pictures and then click ok. it will only save there. not any where else
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  Posted on November 24, 2009 17:26
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Nice Job :amused
  Posted on November 24, 2009 17:27
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6.5/10
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  Posted on November 24, 2009 17:28
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just great!

9/10 :teeth :blink
  Posted on November 24, 2009 17:44
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