X's Poem/Rap

XxdiversexX Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 24 Joined on: November 24, 2008

#1 She is the most beautiful figure that stands out in this community all girls ain't on her level so this is your only oppertunity she is the one that unites all girls within one unity what makes her beautiful is her soul and perfect purity I state all guyz who got a chance withchu all lack maturity but im the one who will give you full security and don't even bother with maturity cuz i pass it with flying colors and straight up purity rate and say what could make it better 91 Tournaments Won Epictastic Avatar by The One The Only, Drum roll please! Tatsu Kinomiya Soul-Arena HollowStark Fallen Legacy S-A Soul-Arena Profile

Trepadora-Two Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2524 Joined on: September 6, 2009

#2 Something that isn't about a girl. 22 % //•T r e p a d o r a ? •Ulquiorra_san & Avy by Akatsunara //• Ugh, Gtfo of my face. iTrepa™ <----Kyuubi rage.

Basshunter Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1952 Joined on: September 23, 2007

#3 4/10 Didn't get the first part where you said opportunity. What did you mean? Edit: also didn't get the part of maturity. In poems, besides of the rhyme, consider the meaning of it. You are never given a dream without also being given the power to make it true.

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#4 Trepadora-Two wrote: Something that isn't about a girl. 22 % explain more i don't understand 91 Tournaments Won Epictastic Avatar by The One The Only, Drum roll please! Tatsu Kinomiya Soul-Arena HollowStark Fallen Legacy S-A Soul-Arena Profile

RuneFang Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3396 Joined on: October 1, 2009

#5 it dosent sound like a poem sounds more like rap to me 0/10 sorry hate rap ? My Character Collection////-Equinox Official Topic////-Equinox Official Recruitment////-Equinox Chat Nari loves you lots~ <3 Hai hai, support the Panda Brigade! =D ~Saky Signed by teh Falcon :D Laughter is so much fun! ^^ -Mirrory I Wuvs you <3 ~ Aya Siggy by me!

Lazy_Genius_13 Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 17417 Joined on: October 4, 2007

#6 i would take some of the weaker lines and make them imperfect rhymes to strengthen it because your continual rhyme loses effect about halfway through, add breaks to it and the mind doesn't get so tired of it ¦¦ ℓαzу© ¦¦ Ain't A Pretty Boytoy, I'll Rock You Steady: Rough And Ready ¦¦ ¦¦Teams ¦ Etre le coup de foudre ¦ Foundations ¦¦

Trepadora-Two Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2524 Joined on: September 6, 2009

#7 XxdiversexX wrote: Trepadora-Two wrote: Something that isn't about a girl. 22 % explain more i don't understand About 73 percent fo poems are about girls. Choose something more inspiring. Like.......................... Ketchup. //•T r e p a d o r a ? •Ulquiorra_san & Avy by Akatsunara //• Ugh, Gtfo of my face. iTrepa™ <----Kyuubi rage.

XxdiversexX Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 24 Joined on: November 24, 2008

#8 Trepadora-Two wrote: XxdiversexX wrote: Trepadora-Two wrote: Something that isn't about a girl. 22 % explain more i don't understand About 73 percent fo poems are about girls. Choose something more inspiring. Like.......................... Ketchup. lol, but girls are cute angels sent from above, y not give em the attention at a time 91 Tournaments Won Epictastic Avatar by The One The Only, Drum roll please! Tatsu Kinomiya Soul-Arena HollowStark Fallen Legacy S-A Soul-Arena Profile

Basshunter Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1952 Joined on: September 23, 2007

#9 XxdiversexX wrote: Trepadora-Two wrote: XxdiversexX wrote: Trepadora-Two wrote: Something that isn't about a girl. 22 % explain more i don't understand About 73 percent fo poems are about girls. Choose something more inspiring. Like.......................... Ketchup. lol, but girls are cute angels sent from above, y not give em the attention at a time That's not the kind of attention they want. Mine would kill me if I sang rap. You are never given a dream without also being given the power to make it true.

jun-ongbaksu Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 882 Joined on: May 26, 2008

#10 yeah not the best poem/rap i eva heard but good try..........i think... ~sigless simplicity~

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#11 5............................................. You say "Crazy" like it's a bad thing!

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