.Ari's poem


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  Posted on November 22, 2009 22:38
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Horrible. Just horrible...

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Dear my friend, always my daylight.
Always with me.

Dear my friend, always my nightlight
Always with me.

All the feelings I wish to show
are formless and cannot even be molded by my hands.

Let alone my heart, which is bursting with joy.

The sadness I once had float by like the clouds,
and my happiness is just as expansive as the sky.

The boundless snippets of insecurities
I once had shall be carried away with the wind.

I’m so happy, not even I can conceive it.

Somehow I have the feeling that
my dreams aren’t far off from today.

I believe it...

No longer need I walk with hesitation.
I’ll walk into the uncertain horizon, the future.


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  Posted on November 22, 2009 22:40
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.... Perfection is very close to Ari's Work...

'Nuf Said. :oh
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There's an issue when all the talk is more about 'security' and less about freedom.
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  Posted on November 22, 2009 22:40
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Wonderful:amused :amused I like it
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  Posted on November 22, 2009 22:41
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Pretty nice

i like it :amused
  Posted on November 23, 2009 01:47
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Thanks all.
  Posted on November 23, 2009 10:53
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hah nyc poem.......fills me with joy thats
for sure...:teeth
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  Posted on November 23, 2009 13:11
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8/10
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  Posted on November 23, 2009 13:13
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Aww, my Kawai-Chan is happy. :embarressed
Personally, I enjoyed it. 10/10.
  Posted on November 25, 2009 01:35
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sauke1616 wrote:
Aww, my Kawai-Chan is happy. :embarressed
Personally, I enjoyed it. 10/10.

Me happy?

Ah ha. Talk about a fairytale.

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  Posted on November 25, 2009 16:44
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...ah, what can i say?
amazing again?
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  Posted on November 25, 2009 18:08
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experiment18 wrote:
...ah, what can i say?
amazing again?

:embarressed
  Posted on June 29, 2010 23:43
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10...........................................
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