R4 Soul Trap


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  Posted on November 22, 2009 00:40
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Breaking Down

"Open your eyes.. look at your life Dexter, look at your mistakes in a mirror

see what you have become, get up Dexter .. its a new day you need to put on

a false smile and lie to yourself that today will be a good day.."

Encouragement.. would be nice .. a poem with no words, a pencil laying on the floor

I write these things so my heart will feel lighter, so give me today let me feel special

give me something to write for .. I feel a break down coming so I hold my notebook

and pray to a God that I no longer see as my savior, so why do I kneel as I hold empty

words and pray, do I pray to my mother to give me hope.. Open your eyes look at your

life, don't you see the evil glaring in your eyes you want revenge, but who to blame..

seek not the notebook you hold close to your heart, but seek a woman to rip open

your wounds and show you the love that still resides. But who can love a monster,

I see none .. some days I want to take the pencil and stab holes into my skull,

and hide my existence inside myself from the world.. take revenge on those close then

rip yourself open, give new life to the notebook that lays closed.. give me just today..

I will try to keep my false smile glaring ... erase the words written on the pages, give

into the stupidity that surrounds, let them rip your entrails out .. give in and close your

eyes, see a new day in your gaze .



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Growing tired of writing unappreciated poems..
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  Posted on November 22, 2009 00:43
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  Posted on November 22, 2009 00:46
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  Posted on November 22, 2009 00:47
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Now that was a deep poem.........
great words used.........

9/10
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  Posted on November 22, 2009 02:41
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I guess today wasn't what I wished it to be..
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  Posted on November 22, 2009 06:42
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Reaper434 wrote:
I guess today wasn't what I wished it to be..

and why is that?.........
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  Posted on November 22, 2009 09:28
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deep, but i loved it
great poem.
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  Posted on June 29, 2010 23:31
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10.......................................
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