Ari's short poem.

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 10456 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#1 Extremely short free-verse. - I should’ve known better than to search for what was never on this land. Something about being a villain is wrong. I, the one who aims to overcome the fantasy what I could never conceive awaits me. So, what if I took advantage of you? You weren’t the one blinded, it was I, that you trampled with heartlessness. My pillar withholding ambition is what is keeping me alive at this moment. Love is a mere never-land, born in selfishness’s wake. You doubt what I am saying but, I’m correct. - Constructively comment and/or criticize. And indefinitely the message is there. Ah yes, what I searched for that I shouldn't have was "friendship". I'm sorry if my poem's to hard to analyze and understand. /sarcasm/. I love Alyssa: my world, my light, my everything, my Darling.

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#2 Uhhh................ 6/10. +=MiNa GoRoShI=+ .::!!Member of The Official Band!!::. ..::""Avatar Made By Me""::.. -95% Percent of teens would have a breakdown if Miley Cyrus was standing on the edge of a tower ready to jump, copy and paste if your a part of the 5% yelling "Jump Bitch!" Quote by Tendou Souji Walking The Path Of Heaven, To Rule Everything!

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#3 Nice I like it!9.1|10 X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|X|

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#4 Not bad 7.5/10 'T o s h i m a ™ Member ™ avy by : Tosh ////sign by : Enrike ///Tosh///Player // ~[new warnings system]~ ~[Naruto-Boards Forum Guide]~ ~[GaGa]~ ~[Juninho]~ Quote by Lord_Akatsuki não é necessário que um membro seja popular para tornasse um mod.

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#5 9/10 I have no idea what just happen Just to painful Wow Super Dragon Soul

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#6 10/10. Based on life is what I like. Just Let It Be,They're That Awesome. Stuff You Never Noticed As Child.

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#8 ~9/10 Very Nice~ ||Gfxer||Gimper||ProudAsyMember||OnePiecefan||ShowCase Coming Soon||The new queen, Britney Spears shall take her reign||Avy By Kiba|| ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Coolidger Rank: member Forum Rank: Chuunin Posts: 627 Joined on: August 17, 2006

#9 Not at all. Easy to understand what your getting at. 6/10

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#10 It explains life perfectly, another good one. 10/10 "The good times today, are the bad thoughts of tomorrow" "We are all witnesses" R.I.P mom and dad </3

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Kage Posts: 10456 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#11 Thanks everyone. I love Alyssa: my world, my light, my everything, my Darling.

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#12 ah, great poem again wondeful! you me at six ava from Ari<3

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