Dairy of an evil kitty


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  Posted on November 10, 2009 22:55
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Day one: Today some guy grabed me while I was eating my daily snack by the dump. I can't beleive he had the nerve to take me by the neck. Thats the one spot I'm the most vunerable. Unfortunatle, he locked me in this cage all night. I can't w8 till I see him again. I'll have something for him alright!
  Posted on November 10, 2009 22:56
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kinda strange btw its diary not dairy:confused
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  Posted on November 10, 2009 22:56
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Geeezzzz



Day one is not good
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  Posted on November 10, 2009 22:56
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ok gl with your crazy life
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  Posted on November 10, 2009 22:57
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I hate people who try these made up diarys.
:nutsYou should throw a brick at who ever said that... :nuts

  Posted on November 10, 2009 22:57
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umm good luck....:huh
  Posted on November 10, 2009 22:59
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LMFAO, that is pretty creepy (nrd) but I don't get the title "Dairy of an Evil Kitty" There is no kitty in the story (nrd) .
  Posted on November 10, 2009 23:07
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deesims wrote:
LMFAO, that is pretty creepy (nrd) but I don't get the title "Dairy of an Evil Kitty" There is no kitty in the story (nrd) .
It's told from the point of view of a kitty.

To be locked up is something dramatic for a kitty to go through. That's why the entry for Day 1 shouldn't be so short. Make it larger. It's really not very suspenseful or encouraging for me, the reader, to take the time to read. Just give more details and explain why the kitty is apparently "evil".
  Posted on November 10, 2009 23:10
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Good luck with this... it could prove to be interesting...
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  Posted on November 10, 2009 23:12
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culhesa wrote:
I hate people who try these made up diarys.

and i hate people who r jerks.. ya here that Ryan
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