.:: Animal Realm Pain (S) by lder ::.

lder Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 4055 Joined on: August 1, 2007

#1 Do Not Spam in here! Check my new collection , my balancing guide . - Instead of only rating the character, give a feedback so that I could know what is wrong with him, or why he's good/bad. - If you say over/underpowered, please say why; - Make constructive comments; - CnC; - Feel free to make suggestions; - Enjoy! ------------------------------------ Animal Real Pain (S): Hyuuga <3 || Miltam <3 || Bhavik <3 Songz <3 Wanna be a CC Maker? Read! The Holy Book of Chars! -Passes out from excitement- -retired

igi34 Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 4855 Joined on: October 22, 2009

#2 8/10 Nice +Christmas Updates and News +Steps to Retrieving Account +New Warnings System +New Forum Guide +The Ninth Altar

PhineasPhreak Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 4320 Joined on: December 4, 2008

#3 You should turn your talents to PA. Youd be useful I think. Talk to MirrorForce. And as always: pwnsome. 100% Critiscism: Too much text on 50% of the skills. 54 free avatars dump. I gots four MOABs, you jelly?

Itachi-dani Rank: member Forum Rank: Chuunin Posts: 445 Joined on: September 19, 2008

#4 the bird summoning should do piercing damage not affliction 8/10

Sm_life Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 5479 Joined on: December 31, 2008

#5 8/10[url= ][/url] • Goal: Learn to Gfx • R3T1R3D •

lder Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 4055 Joined on: August 1, 2007

#6 @PhineasPhreak: Anko has the same amount of text Thanks ^^ Itachi-dani wrote: the bird summoning should do piercing damage not affliction 8/10 Maybe you're right. Since he has other offensive skills, perhaps piercing it's the best option. Thanks ^^ - being nerfed - Hyuuga <3 || Miltam <3 || Bhavik <3 Songz <3 Wanna be a CC Maker? Read! The Holy Book of Chars! -Passes out from excitement- -retired

niksancheto Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 9683 Joined on: September 11, 2008

#7 10 very niice lder, love the pics, well ballanced, nothing more to say exept that's one pwnsome character .. SexCase / 'Confining The Jinchuuriki' & 'Arrancar: Downfall' Screenshot Showcase / Utakata (S)

Mirrorforce Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 10365 Joined on: December 8, 2007

#8 This character is great, but: 1) Words spelled wrong: "Oh" should be "On", Take out "Of", "Skil" should be "Skill", "Real" should be "Realm" 2) Crustacean Summoning is OP because of its affliction effect 3) Bird summoning is also OP due to high affliction damage with no cooldown 4) Take out "Instant" from Amplification Summoning's class 5) "Animal Path" and "Animal Real Path" is used incorrectly, don't be lazy and change out those names to "Animal Realm Pain" like it should be 6) "Your team" should be changed to "All allies" All finished, for right now, it's 9/10 and the pics are so bad***, after change, I would say 10/10 My Love <3 / Thanks for the tag gift Ginny and Tsu X3 / Butter Clouds X3 What a minute! Where do Pokemon eggs really come from? o.o

makuto189 Rank: member Forum Rank: Special Jounin Posts: 841 Joined on: December 5, 2008

#9 9

waterone Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 5744 Joined on: February 4, 2009

#10 Balanced with good quality. Only a few typos, like "Real" instead of "Realm" and some another. Looks good, and honestly, I'm doind an Animal Realm Pain too:amused How to Go on a Date with Megan Fox 100 Icon Batch!

marcel147 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1785 Joined on: April 18, 2008

#11 nice work:amused ...9/10 HcM tag. TOURNAMENTS WINS:11 LAST TUORNAMENT WIN: ICQ: 4235336...SKYPE: marcel14775...EMAIL: marcel147@azet.sk

Curling Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3015 Joined on: November 8, 2007

#12 8/10:amused

infernocash Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 6398 Joined on: June 4, 2007

#13 everythings good, just some spelling errors:amused

lder Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 4055 Joined on: August 1, 2007

#14 @Mirrorforce: 1) Make sure you refresh the page. I noticed the typos, and had changed them already 2) I was thinking in making it only last 1 turn, but that way, it seems UP (I think). But maybe I'll do that. 3) It's piercing now. And I don't considered it OP since it can only be used after using a 2 specific chakra skill (and it also costs bloodline chakra). But I'll think on it - maybe add a C/D of 1. 4) It needs to have the Instant class. Only the damage part is Action (thus interrupted). All the defense is Instant. 5) Narutopedia writes "Animal Path" all the time, that's why I changed it to that. It was easier to write. But I'll change it, no problem 6) Done. Really thanks ^^ I'll think in some of the balancing changes, and if I agree with them, I'll change it @others: Thanks ^^ Hyuuga <3 || Miltam <3 || Bhavik <3 Songz <3 Wanna be a CC Maker? Read! The Holy Book of Chars! -Passes out from excitement- -retired

Itachi-dani Rank: member Forum Rank: Chuunin Posts: 445 Joined on: September 19, 2008

#15 its better now:amused 10/10

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