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Posted on November 7, 2009 01:30

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New poem I wrote...it had no..particular way to be written. I just wrote it as how I felt expressed. Feel free to express opinions, and rate if you want. I don't care..lol. :oh

-Let Me Think-

Let me sit here and think a bit,
What am I to do,
I could always follow my heart..
But doing so before left me stranded,
Lost and confused,
Never knowing what to do,

Where am I going?
Wait and see what happens,
Let life take whatever it wants from me?
Leaving me hopeless and abandoned?

I tried giving up,
Not caring what happens,
It'll work for a while,
Although never long enough,

I've let a lot get the best of me,
How did that make me feel?
Weak and no longer who I was before,
Stained like white carpet from red wine,
Never to be whole again,

Didn't want to be a part of anything,
So why did I let it happen?
I'll question everything I do,

And why am I doing that..
Am I really that afraid of my own mistakes?
Pondering all the choices and decisions,

I have to make sure I know what I'm getting into,
But...is it the good choice?
Have I made the best decision?
Not for you..
But for me?

Je t'aime, Ariana.
Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana
It's never ending OMG!
Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana
To bad I really love it.
Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana Ariana
Space Filled By Her.<3

I love you Ariana. With all my heart.

Posted on November 7, 2009 01:39

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Wow, I really like this poem. I think Walt Whitman would be proud. :amazed

Perhaps you wrote it without a care in the world, but that's what gives it such an interesting aurora in my opinion. Looking at your signature and avatar, I'd say you wrote this poem in honor of Shikamaru. In that case, you did a damn good job of capturing his personality.

10/10. :amazed

Keep it up! :blink

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Posted on November 7, 2009 01:45

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10 awesome dnt stop writtin

made by me stocks shop

Posted on November 7, 2009 01:51

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10/10 wow.... that's all i can say

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Posted on November 7, 2009 01:51

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-newhope- wrote:

Wow, I really like this poem. I think Walt Whitman would be proud. :amazed

Keep it up! :blink

Thank you alot for the comment and rating. :)

Aaron: I don't plan to stop, I am very pleased to know people enjoy it. :)

Ternek: Thank you! :)

Posted on November 7, 2009 20:15

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lol....
great poem Aly!!!
i enjoyed reading it^^
also, this is how you feel?
i thought it was beautiful

Hoppy<3

Posted on November 7, 2009 20:17

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8 +1 lesbian bonus = 9 nice

Posted on November 7, 2009 20:44

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Akatsuki-Tobi-XS wrote:

8 +1 lesbian bonus = 9 nice

Just let it go Tobi lmfao.

Thanks Kim :) And..yes that is how I feel...rofl

Posted on November 8, 2009 15:34

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I like it although it's long.

ʎsuq ןooɟ ɐ pǝǝʞ oʇ ʎɐʍ pooƃ ɐ sı sıɥʇ

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Posted on November 8, 2009 19:18

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#10

9/10
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Posted on November 8, 2009 19:20

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#11

10/10.
I Luv it. :D

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