iSleeping's Poem #1

iSleeping Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 178 Joined on: October 31, 2009

#1 Love-By iSleeping If I had a wish it would be that me and you could be together so you can feel my pain and Ill feel yours when ever you smile, I'll smile too sharing our fealings sharing our love that way we will never forget each other and never look back and regret because when Im with you I learn the meaning of true Love First poem, so dont be harsh:push ..::Avatar by LegendaryArtist::.. Poem #1::My Team Guide

N92991 Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 4322 Joined on: April 24, 2009

#2 7 put the poem parts in italic We bang respect and let our actions talk, want a taste of it muddafucka? Peace was never born~ S'pitty awesomeness isnt a science i'd have myself a subject.

Noob-King Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3349 Joined on: January 31, 2008

#3 I like it but theres no rhythm 8/10 � Look at my Character Collection Look Here. �

zhiguang Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1194 Joined on: June 24, 2009

#4 Umm Good Work 10/10.

shayneblock Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2055 Joined on: June 17, 2009

#5 8/10 itz good an romantic too

KOJO3 Rank: member Forum Rank: Chuunin Posts: 200 Joined on: June 1, 2009

#6 nice poem, its deep lol 9/10

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