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  Posted on October 22, 2009 22:32
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Sitting there at the computer.
Thinking of the next action to take in his life,
as he gets ready to move again, another chapter in his life is about to open and close. Ready to start were he left off back in his home town to meet some old friends and make some new.A couple days have passed since getting a call from his mom telling him that he a his little sister will be moving sooner then they expected as he would sit there packing his bags and taking a drink of the Vodka straight from the bottle not being to concerd about taking a break from his drunken high to relax and watch time go by...but he sit there listen to music think if he should take another sip of Vodka with clouded judgement he hastefully chungs the whole bottle then tossing it aside as he would finish packing his bags...

I'll complete it when I get back -.< sorry for cut it off,but leave a comment anyway

Part 2 is here.. another epic Chapter.
Well everyone you got what you asked for the concluding part of the first short and dreadful ending of part 1.
Well he arrived home back in California to a home that he didn't want to end up in a disrespectful cousin a bitch of a god-mother and a ungodly god-sister,but not all was lost to his surprise he was amazed by the new edition to his sibling list as he was greeted by an infant child his mother had given birth to while they were away,his eyes gleamed wide as he smiled at the sight of the sleeping infant as he dropped his luggage on the floor and ran to the kitchen for some well needed normal substance in his stomach from his 5 day long train ride as he reminisced of the new people he met along the way.

Several months went by as things didn't seem to change as his relationship with his gf ended in a much needed stand still from all the fighting Gonna complete later
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  Posted on October 22, 2009 22:39
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is that based on your real life?
well, nice story.
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  Posted on October 22, 2009 22:48
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lol are u that no ur not old enough
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  Posted on October 22, 2009 22:52
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UchihaIzuna wrote:
is that based on your real life?
well, nice story.
yes,it is based on my life
@mcseel- I'm 20 almost 21 it doesn't matter if I'm of age or not :oh
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  Posted on October 22, 2009 23:10
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lmao but finish man please
off topic clicky my 2 squibys please:rolleyes
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  Posted on October 22, 2009 23:12
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interesting rain....cant wait for u to finish it:amused
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  Posted on October 22, 2009 23:12
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littlec22 wrote:
lmao but finish man please
off topic clicky my 2 squibys please:rolleyes
I'll add more depending on the vote Lil:push
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  Posted on October 22, 2009 23:14
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Sasukeusumaki wrote:
littlec22 wrote:
lmao but finish man please
off topic clicky my 2 squibys please:rolleyes
I'll add more depending on the vote Lil:push
idc u add more or i get angry :evil :mad :mad u dont want to see me angry and also if u dont finish it i will be in suspense
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  Posted on October 22, 2009 23:15
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littlec22 wrote:
Sasukeusumaki wrote:
littlec22 wrote:
lmao but finish man please
off topic clicky my 2 squibys please:rolleyes
I'll add more depending on the vote Lil:push
idc u add more or i get angry :evil :mad :mad u dont want to see me angry and also if u dont finish it i will be in suspense
lol you gonna go all Incredible hulk on me
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  Posted on October 22, 2009 23:18
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Sasukeusumaki wrote:
littlec22 wrote:
Sasukeusumaki wrote:
littlec22 wrote:
lmao but finish man please
off topic clicky my 2 squibys please:rolleyes
I'll add more depending on the vote Lil:push
idc u add more or i get angry :evil :mad :mad u dont want to see me angry and also if u dont finish it i will be in suspense
lol you gonna go all Incredible hulk on me
:notrust :notrust y the hell does every single person think im gonna go hulk on them i go way worse i got like the hulk the thing and all supervillians combined
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  Posted on October 22, 2009 23:27
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littlec22 wrote:
Sasukeusumaki wrote:
littlec22 wrote:
Sasukeusumaki wrote:
littlec22 wrote:
lmao but finish man please
off topic clicky my 2 squibys please:rolleyes
I'll add more depending on the vote Lil:push
idc u add more or i get angry :evil :mad :mad u dont want to see me angry and also if u dont finish it i will be in suspense
lol you gonna go all Incredible hulk on me
:notrust :notrust y the hell does every single person think im gonna go hulk on them i go way worse i got like the hulk the thing and all supervillians combined
lol just that's what you make everyone think
Most dominant Force ever<3//First! ~Nim//♥ //Banned//My sex appeal
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Rebel of this party , I'm in love with all your danger . We can live togheter , I can be your pagan angel. -Gin