R4 Systematic Solution

Reaper434 Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3249 Joined on: September 9, 2006

#1 Links Reborn Sympathy Desolate & Forgotten "4 .. 3 .. 4 / Give me life.." ^Systematic Solution^ Systematic Solution Is it possible to make a conclusion about a possible systematic solution, this conclusion can only be you standing beside me the solution the cataclysmic solution to the grand question "Why do we exist?" If I didn't exist would you not as well if we would both disappear could a world belong in the grasp of man without the existence of our love? My mathematical conclusion is that four-three-four continues to systematically reappear and fade away, this love we share is a discrimination of others, a hatred hollowed and withered away into love that me and you can only share. April 3, 2004 - The beginning of a new life Enough Questions I am sad to say that it has came the day to stop the questions, the restless, are a witness to a world of questions, the dreamers, dream of a place where nothing needs a answer, a place where people share the streams of fate. The restless see only questions, they quest for answers to all life's mysteries, Why must the restless continue to refuse to close their eyes? You as a witness I asked a question that will never be answered, but does that mean I am plagued by restlessness that will last forever? || R4 Resolution Showcase v1.1 || Anime-Planet Profile || Reaper434's Personal Chat || || Signature by - Schweppess || Avatar by - Sandmanxx23 || Gift #1 || + || Gift #2 ||

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 11056 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#2 Beautiful. I lack other words to describe your writing.

jaden_3051 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2619 Joined on: June 11, 2007

#3 8 out of ten its good

Reaper434 Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3249 Joined on: September 9, 2006

#4 Shino*Girl wrote: Beautiful. I lack other words to describe your writing. Glad you enjoyed my writing, Ari.^^ || R4 Resolution Showcase v1.1 || Anime-Planet Profile || Reaper434's Personal Chat || || Signature by - Schweppess || Avatar by - Sandmanxx23 || Gift #1 || + || Gift #2 ||

happy29 Rank: member Forum Rank: Chuunin Posts: 258 Joined on: July 5, 2007

#5 They're both very good. :) I can relate to the first poem, Systematic Soloution. I give you a 10/10 :) <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 Let's make it known that I will not be on often because I'm just sooooo busy with school and everything and if I am on it's just so that I can check my pms. So yeah.....bye ~ K!K! </3

ita6i92 Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3404 Joined on: July 27, 2007

#6 wierd composition but and ok for an amature class poet 7/10

Reaper434 Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3249 Joined on: September 9, 2006

#7 Am I suppose to accept a stamp of poem writing novice? I have been writing poems for six years, but thank you for the comment.. ^^ || R4 Resolution Showcase v1.1 || Anime-Planet Profile || Reaper434's Personal Chat || || Signature by - Schweppess || Avatar by - Sandmanxx23 || Gift #1 || + || Gift #2 ||

Shino*Girl Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 11056 Joined on: September 24, 2006

#8 Teddy is no amateur nor novice.

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