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  Posted on September 6, 2009 09:16
Torn
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KOKAKOLA1227 wrote:
It's because its the nickname I gave you back when you were my Guardian in H-I.
We should start talking more..

And I also remember Mamimi and Twinny! :D

o.o Who?
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  Posted on September 6, 2009 09:19
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Mamimi = Littlehinata, your wifey.
Twinny = Fallen_Angel, my twin sister.

And me, teh luvable puppy. :D
...Forever Sandai Kitetsu.
Finding peace...
  Posted on September 6, 2009 13:00
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#63
Just reposting this. C:
Yoruichi-san<3<3<3 wrote:
So here's Jin10's avatar.. I didn't know how he would want his
avatar so I made two versions. o.o

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EDIT: oh and about the Jewel Caves.. you made a typo :P or.. grammar thing. just helping you a lil. x3
Jewel Caves wrote:
Around all the Earth, there are protected caves, where the Dragons that are the source for all of the beautiful Gemstones live. They are the heart of the colours and brilliance, and whoever is gifted to see one of them is required to stay dozens of days preparing their eyes. Their splendour is so high that it blinds at an instant. These dragons rarely leave their caves unless something really important does happen in the outside World. The most rare and sacred of all them is called the Crystal Dragon of Night.

x3 and well because I have some freetime Imma continue helping. x3.. and also this will be the first time that I read a whole clan topic.. EVER
History (the first paragraph) wrote:
Once upon a time, when the Earth was still virgin, many creatures used to roam over all possible horizons, with purity and strength; and all the planets were in harmony. Amoung them, there was a race blessed by the Gods with living consciousness, invincible power and unmatchable wisdom; and this was later called the Golden Dragon Era.

... wow.... now that I've read the history.. o.o .. I.. wow..
Dragon Fields (first paragraph) wrote:
After the End of the Fifth Era, the Sage of Dreams created, for each space within the Earth, Dragon Spirits that would overlook and care for them, do not allow the growing numbers of Humans, their distant sons, to disturb or break the fragile Equilibrium between every environment, and punish them if they did.

Gonna read through the rest of the topic now and continue editing this post if needed.


EDIT AGAIN:
Whispering Forests (you jsut forgot a word x3) wrote:
Elder Dragon of the Forest
Paradoxical Dragon of the tree of knowledge – Jin10

oh and the alliance banner.. could I get that stock (if you still have it)? Because.. well crystals. :3

DONE
  Posted on September 6, 2009 13:32
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#64
Yoruichi-san wrote:
Just reposting this. C:
Yoruichi-san<3<3<3 wrote:
So here's Jin10's avatar.. I didn't know how he would want his
avatar so I made two versions. o.o

2r7rqz7.jpg 2rx6v4y.jpg

EDIT: oh and about the Jewel Caves.. you made a typo :P or.. grammar thing. just helping you a lil. x3
Jewel Caves wrote:
Around all the Earth, there are protected caves, where the Dragons that are the source for all of the beautiful Gemstones live. They are the heart of the colours and brilliance, and whoever is gifted to see one of them is required to stay dozens of days preparing their eyes. Their splendour is so high that it blinds at an instant. These dragons rarely leave their caves unless something really important does happen in the outside World. The most rare and sacred of all them is called the Crystal Dragon of Night.

x3 and well because I have some freetime Imma continue helping. x3.. and also this will be the first time that I read a whole clan topic.. EVER
History (the first paragraph) wrote:
Once upon a time, when the Earth was still virgin, many creatures used to roam over all possible horizons, with purity and strength; and all the planets were in harmony. Amoung them, there was a race blessed by the Gods with living consciousness, invincible power and unmatchable wisdom; and this was later called the Golden Dragon Era.

... wow.... now that I've read the history.. o.o .. I.. wow..
Dragon Fields (first paragraph) wrote:
After the End of the Fifth Era, the Sage of Dreams created, for each space within the Earth, Dragon Spirits that would overlook and care for them, do not allow the growing numbers of Humans, their distant sons, to disturb or break the fragile Equilibrium between every environment, and punish them if they did.

Gonna read through the rest of the topic now and continue editing this post if needed.

This girl is too smart for me :cool
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In memorial of Fuuin Jutsu
  Posted on September 6, 2009 13:40
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#65
lol shinta. x3



and btw there's nothing more to edit now. xD Just be sure to to fix the thread, indi. :3

<3 Love Hiryuu-Indou.

btw MissE, I posted your H-I Tag on the forum... but just in case o.o here:

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  Posted on September 6, 2009 14:34
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#66
Yoruichi-san wrote:
lol shinta. x3



and btw there's nothing more to edit now. xD Just be sure to to fix the thread, indi. :3

<3 Love Hiryuu-Indou.

btw MissE, I posted your H-I Tag on the forum... but just in case o.o here:

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Thank you very much. ^^
  Posted on September 6, 2009 14:42
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MissE wrote:
Yoruichi-san wrote:
lol shinta. x3



and btw there's nothing more to edit now. xD Just be sure to to fix the thread, indi. :3

<3 Love Hiryuu-Indou.

btw MissE, I posted your H-I Tag on the forum... but just in case o.o here:

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Thank you very much. ^^
No Problem at all. ^^
  Posted on September 6, 2009 15:32
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#68
Yoruichi-san wrote:
MissE wrote:
Yoruichi-san wrote:
lol shinta. x3



and btw there's nothing more to edit now. xD Just be sure to to fix the thread, indi. :3

<3 Love Hiryuu-Indou.

btw MissE, I posted your H-I Tag on the forum... but just in case o.o here:

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Thank you very much. ^^
No Problem at all. ^^


Edited everything. It makes me feel satisfied that you did like my little introduction story. Almost no one reads it. Everyone that does find it interesting, though.

And I'll put Torn and Fatdog and the others that were with us at the time of "Jewels", whenever I feel like it.
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  Posted on September 6, 2009 15:41
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#69
Ow ow ow.... grammar nazi muscles are twitching.

First of all, Hi Shinta, Harry, and whoever else said "Hi" to me. :amused

Second... Yoruichi-san... "Amoung"? Is it a British thing?
Jewel Caves wrote:
Around all the Earth, there are protected caves, where live the Dragons that are the source of all of the beautiful Gemstones.
This was correct. He simply put the noun after the verb in his adjective clause. It's not often written in that order, but it is techinically not wrong.
Quote:
These dragons rarely leave their caves unless something really important does happen in the outside World.
You're right about this one, though. "Do" should be "does".
History (the first paragraph wrote:
Once upon a time, when the Earth was still virgin, many creatures used to roam over all possible horizons, with purity and strength; and all the planet was in harmony. Among them, there was a race blessed by the Gods with living consciousness, invincible power, and unmatched wisdom; and this was later called the Golden Dragon Era.
In this paragraph, Indi meant "all of the planet". He talks about a single planet and therefore was correct to use the singlular verb. ("All" being the noun and one entitiy.) "Unmatched" is also a proper adjective. "Unmatchable" is too. :unsure
Dragon Fields (first paragraph) wrote:
After the End of the Fifth Era, the Sage of Dreams created, for each space within the Earth, Dragon Spirits that would overlook and care for them, do not allowing the growing numbers of Humans, their distant sons, to disturb or break the fragile Equilibrium between every environment, and punish them if they did.
Err... umm... I just don't know what you were trying to do for this paragraph. I'd rewrite it completely, but It's probably fine if we just remove the word "do".

......


..... Yaya for new thread! :amused
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  Posted on September 6, 2009 17:26
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I didn't read it =3 I was only searching for my soon-to-be wife's title :embarressed

And how are you doing Vivi :E? Do you still live in Norway :amazed ? And how is your polish friend doing :laugh ?
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In memorial of Fuuin Jutsu
  Posted on September 6, 2009 18:17
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Grammar girls battle ftw, right shin? :oh
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  Posted on September 6, 2009 19:06
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#72
Wow, and I really was looking for Lee's name up there, I saw it in my profile so I was looking for it.

How much longer till someone attempts my field, I'm thirtsy to try something out.


Oh, and thanks for all the kind words guys.

Love the avi Vivi
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  Posted on September 6, 2009 19:30
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Hiryuu_Indou wrote:
Grammar girls battle ftw, right shin? :oh

Only if they are naked:oh Or at least only in underwear:push
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In memorial of Fuuin Jutsu
  Posted on September 6, 2009 20:07
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Well then here's a toast to wishful thinking yo
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  Posted on September 6, 2009 20:11
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#75
Well I remember I said I will post at this topic for someone.. so here I am xD anyways love the revival of HI, especially with the cool looking members. Hey, maybe you can set up a war with me alone x3
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