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Posted on July 4, 2009 13:21

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i know u are bored but i am too suggest about cooldowns please:amused
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Posted on July 4, 2009 13:23

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Its good I would just make the Punch CD 3 because the way it is, you can just use it again after its done:push Otherwise, good 8/10

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Posted on July 4, 2009 13:23

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7/10 >.>

Posted on July 4, 2009 13:26

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3/10
Pics are big and Low quality

Focus: Should be Focus Energy/Counter. You spelt "targets" and "melee" wrong.

Punch: Should be Double Slap (Have you ever USED a Poliwrath/Poliwhirl in pokemon?) Should have a 3 turn cooldown, and deal 20 damage each turn

Hydro pump: Change the description, as Not all water pokemon can learn Hydro Pump. It should be "Ranged, Special, Instant" not "Physical, Instant, Melee". You also spelt "melee" wrong again.

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Posted on July 4, 2009 13:26

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Posted on July 4, 2009 13:27

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8/10...................

Posted on July 4, 2009 13:28

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8/10

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Posted on July 4, 2009 13:34

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TrainSefira wrote:

pics are 75x75 what other dimension??
focus targets oups! :cry

whats wrong with melee
Punch i was thinking about it but i never watched pokemon on english its like kisame in n-a
hydro pump it targets One enemy not two or three but i will change the classes whats wrong with melee

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Posted on July 4, 2009 13:50

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Onix747 wrote:

TrainSefira wrote:

pics are 75x75 what other dimension??
focus targets oups! :cry

Well, they all have a plain black border around them, which is what makes the 75 x 75 look proper.
Also, you spelt Melee "Meele" if you looked.
As for Punch, I know thats what you were thinking and the name you are looking for is Double Slap
Hydro Pump is a ranged move, a blast of an element, hence making it special.
The reason you got a low rating is because I know exactly what you were thinking, because your Poliwrath has 2 stolen skills and 1 semi-original skill

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Posted on July 4, 2009 13:51

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