::Passing On::

Purples Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1172 Joined on: November 8, 2008

#1 Today, I rise like an eagle and crash like a plane burned into ash then to be commercialized in pain to be used for profits to be pawned like a priceless necklace-- though diamonds with no clarity are worthless in my eyes. So slow to be remembered but so quick to be washed away-- from the memory backs of mundane people and, finally-- thrown away into the mist and as I become a number, some letters, and a name-- I'll be remembered for words that don't mean a thing. eyes

GhostMyth Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 5935 Joined on: October 15, 2006

#2 Uh...cool? I'm not much of a poetry grader...I'm semi-confused on why people choose a board filled with egotistical morons to "express themselves". I still give it a 10, it has good meaning.

NarutoFan147 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1601 Joined on: September 1, 2006

#3 congrats:oh |My character showcase| |Credit to Troy for the Sig| ||My s-a acc||Where I'm at||

UchihaMadara361 Rank: member Forum Rank: Akatsuki Posts: 7301 Joined on: January 5, 2009

#4 7/10:cheesy [url= ][/url]

xHaru01x Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1329 Joined on: May 27, 2009

#5 Nice and meaningful writing, Purples. Can't live without Music. <3 ~ My Bisshie Gallery.

Purples Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1172 Joined on: November 8, 2008

#6 thanks guys. eyes

sableng Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3292 Joined on: September 3, 2008

#7 xHaru01x wrote: Nice and meaningful writing, Purples. agreed

RinneganFlash Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1006 Joined on: October 27, 2007

#8 That was frigging Great really liked it hopes it's your own, anyways it was great In Our Darkest Hour, In My Deepest Despair, Will You Still Care? Will You Be There? In My Trials And My Tripulations, Through Our Doubts And Frustrations, In My Violence, In My Turbulence, Through My Fear, And My Confessions, In My Anguish And My Pain, Through My Joy And My Sorrow,In The Promise Of Another Tomorrow I'll Never Let You Part, For You're Always In My Heart. Michael Jackson 1958-2009 R.I.P Greates Entertainer Of All Time thanks to orochimaru-GX for my sig and tag you rock girl ..:.:8 man tournament wins :15 :.:..

fflightninji Rank: member Forum Rank: Chuunin Posts: 425 Joined on: August 18, 2007

#9 It is a good poem give it a 8:teeth Credit to nikhamaru

uchihaaaaaaaaaa Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2419 Joined on: January 20, 2008

#10 You should change the last line to i'll be remembered for words, words don't mean a thing. Otherwise spot on:smile The one(fivesome) amigos- Creed, NK, Tess, Lamb and Uchie. I am one with Entity.

Purples Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1172 Joined on: November 8, 2008

#11 uchihaaaaaaaaaa wrote: You should change the last line to i'll be remembered for words, words don't mean a thing. Otherwise spot on:smile Thanks, but I like my ending better. lol, I seem so selfish. eyes

Desert_Gaara_EX Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1813 Joined on: March 23, 2008

#12 10 [url= ][/url] [url= ][/url] [Legends Rebirth] ~ 07 Vet. // +35 ~ Haters Gonna Hate || .Smack Me. || || .Das's Penis. ||

uchihaaaaaaaaaa Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2419 Joined on: January 20, 2008

#13 Purples wrote: uchihaaaaaaaaaa wrote: You should change the last line to i'll be remembered for words, words don't mean a thing. Otherwise spot on:smile Thanks, but I like my ending better. lol, I seem so selfish. I just thought it suited the flow better, i think the way you touched on commercialization was quite subtle yet it brought attention to it well. The one(fivesome) amigos- Creed, NK, Tess, Lamb and Uchie. I am one with Entity.

uzumakipro97 Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1799 Joined on: March 22, 2008

#14 xHaru01x wrote: Nice and meaningful writing, Purples. Sasuke Credit to KingxBlazex. Avy and Sig by Ash. Insanity and Hater-Aid for life. All about that Taylor Gang amazing

Purples Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1172 Joined on: November 8, 2008

#15 thanks everyone, I think im getting better:confused eyes

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