Poetournament #1: Group Stages underway - Page 6

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#76 hamjammer wrote: Itachi3334 wrote: I'm terribly sorry, but I'm going to have to withdraw from the competition. Going inactive for about two weeks, so yeah. I suppose the other two in my group will get an automatic pass. Also, as a request, I'd rather my poems not be placed in the upcoming showcase. I do hope you'll understand. noooooooo What a shame, i was really enjoying your poetry. My sentiments exactly Credits to someone for making the avatar, Hammy knows who it was...

Nonthreatening Rank: member Forum Rank: Genin Posts: 189 Joined on: April 24, 2009

#77 Poetournament wrote: hamjammer wrote: Itachi3334 wrote: I'm terribly sorry, but I'm going to have to withdraw from the competition. Going inactive for about two weeks, so yeah. I suppose the other two in my group will get an automatic pass. Also, as a request, I'd rather my poems not be placed in the upcoming showcase. I do hope you'll understand. noooooooo What a shame, i was really enjoying your poetry. My sentiments exactly DRN(?) summed up my thoughts. ?Ars Amatoria? DRN wrote: Because your a fag, duh

Poetournament Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 45 Joined on: June 27, 2009

#78 It was DRN, I can't handle all the account changing Credits to someone for making the avatar, Hammy knows who it was...

Poetournament Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 45 Joined on: June 27, 2009

#79 I'll be grading all tonight (KRO) Credits to someone for making the avatar, Hammy knows who it was...

KakashiRinObito Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2514 Joined on: January 30, 2007

#80 Here are my judgeing results...I'm doing a lot at once, so I'm simply posting the numbers I come to, otherwise this post won't fit due to paragraph form of my usual explanations...fuck, I'm supposed to...fine but small ones that are going to look weak anyway...don't judge me...I was in Canada...and if I'm doing these all at once (most) I'm not going to type down all my thoughts like I usually do. By the way...sorry if I'm a bitch...I take apart poetry, also, the reasons I wrote down were made rushed...because I went back and did them later so I'd already lost my train of thought on it a bit. Alex000 and theslimer3 get 0s...apparently. Dawsoe20 Entries: P1:2/5 P2:3/5 P3:5/5 P4:5/5 Could use some flow work, and, the first one is sorta weak. Not because of length, but because it's not really hitting me. hyuugaitachi007 Entries P1:1/5 P2:2/5 P3:2/5 P4:2/5 Your theme poem concentrates too much on ryhming and not enough on finding real meaning, the otehrs do the same a bit, and the last isn't strong enough. Purples Entries P1:4/5 P2:2/5 P3:4/5 P4:3/5 The first poem does a good job in creating a different style. The second poem especially needed work. hebib_uchiha Entries P1:1/5 P2:2/5 P3:1/5 P4:2/5 Grammer has died today a bit man, and some of it doesn't really make sense to me, partially because of the grammer. Blake Entries P1:2/5 P2:2/5 P3:3/5 P4:3/5 These poems somehow seem to be missing expression, they just seem...off to me. Ecchi-Bunneh Entries P1:4/5 P2:3/5 P3:5/5 P4:1/5 I can't really get into the idea during the second poem...it's too attention grabbing through words and not meaning. The last one seems rushed and as if you were just trying to push a poem out. Pilaf Entr9ies P1:0/5 P2:3/5 P3:3/5 P4:0/5 The first and last are lies...lies A big, HARD, man Entries P1:4/5 P2:3/5 P3:4/5 P4:5/5 I certainly enjoed them, but the flow is off sometimes a bit. Takumi Entries P1:3/5 P2:2/5 P3:2/5 P4:5/5 The first one doesn't show me things because I'm against the meaning, it also seems a bit forced. The last was a great improvement. Mono Entries P1:4/5 P2:4/5 P3:3/5 P4:5/5 Well done, it seems that you really made sure to submit meaningful work, the majority that comes off is just flow or strength. Fallen_Moon Entries P1:4/5 P2:3/5 P3:4/5 P4:3/5 Best haiku I've seen in this tourny (so far, a few to go). You sorta suck for making me translate those...a second time XD. Ravino Entries P1:3/5 P2:5/5 P3:3/5 P4:2/5 I enjoyed the strength of your second entry, it was a bit cliche, but in a good way ya know? Where did that go for the next poem? Kairyu Entries P1:3/5 P2:2/5 P3:3/5 P4:3/5 Meaning and stength are what need some work...nuff said. Itachi3334 Entries P1:4/5 P2:3/5 P3:4/5 P4:4/5 The first is pretty, and I usually don't rate these kind of poems high. Ato Amatoria: The Art of Love~~~~~~~~~Foxy Pothead, Frienemy of Lemon~~~~~~~~~JM Honorary #008 ChaosXX wrote: Yes, yes. LTOC (Long, thought out conversation) is the new black

Purples Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1172 Joined on: November 8, 2008

#81 i ish moving to the 2nd round! yay! eyes

hamjammer Rank: member Forum Rank: Sannin Posts: 3557 Joined on: June 2, 2007

#82 Ravino's Scores: #1: 2/5 #2: 5/5 #3: 3/5 #4: 1/5 ~Ato Amatoria-Feel the Art~ "If we settle for nothing now, we'll settle for nothing later." ~Zach de la Rocha

KakashiRinObito Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2514 Joined on: January 30, 2007

#83 So far it looks like...Mono, Purples, and Dawsoe will be cleaning up (assuming there aren't any upsets), and we have a little battle going between a Big Hard Man (going to use it until he regrets it) and Ecchi. Ato Amatoria: The Art of Love~~~~~~~~~Foxy Pothead, Frienemy of Lemon~~~~~~~~~JM Honorary #008 ChaosXX wrote: Yes, yes. LTOC (Long, thought out conversation) is the new black

Purples Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 1172 Joined on: November 8, 2008

#84 KakashiRinObito wrote: So far it looks like...Mono, Purples, and Dawsoe will be cleaning up (assuming there aren't any upsets), and we have a little battle going between a Big Hard Man (going to use it until he regrets it) and Ecchi. could you rate my new poemz. edit: you win this round moon:cheesy eyes

Poetournament Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 45 Joined on: June 27, 2009

#85 Updated Rankings Knock-out Stages Congratulations to those who successfully passed into the next round, and commiserations to those who didn't. We certainly all enjoyed reading every poem, and hope that people will return to participate in the future! Showcase of poetry coming soon! Credits to someone for making the avatar, Hammy knows who it was...

Poetournament Rank: member Forum Rank: Academy Student Posts: 45 Joined on: June 27, 2009

#86 EDIT: Agh, wrong bloody Poetournament topic Credits to someone for making the avatar, Hammy knows who it was...

KakashiRinObito Rank: member Forum Rank: Jounin Posts: 2514 Joined on: January 30, 2007

#87 Reject becomes the number 1 so far Number 2 goes to Dawsoe20 Mono and Fallen_Moon take a tie for number three Sorry purples...that was real close How epic...and thank you to everyone who entered, we hope you've enjoyed this so far and the next will be on its way, after this one ends, of course. Ato Amatoria: The Art of Love~~~~~~~~~Foxy Pothead, Frienemy of Lemon~~~~~~~~~JM Honorary #008 ChaosXX wrote: Yes, yes. LTOC (Long, thought out conversation) is the new black

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